...within your wonderful metaphor and skilled verse...my mind draws a blank...so much between the lines...hidden...but you do it so well Cryssa.
excellent...
John
Amazing work Cryssa! I laughed, I cried. I read it over and over, printed a copy and taped it to the living room wall for all to read!
Possible your best work to date!
That's awesome. I love how the words flow so smoothly... I didn't even think it was possible to describe the Emperor's new clothes...but you did it.. I loved the description of the fable. It was like I was walking right by the emperor on his walk through the gardens, and streets of town. I can't believe no one else commented on the 2nd line of the 3rd stanza. That was my favorite!!!! I know that stanza took you hours!!!
Luv,
Ahna
April Fool's.. hee...hee...hee....
Keep our daddy in Ohio in your prayers; name's Don. Having difficulty in breathing, at doctor's office now. Will keep you abreast as to what's going on....:(
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn.
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Be always safe,
Karen
excellent...
John
Possible your best work to date!
Happy April fools!
WRP
Luv,
Ahna
April Fool's.. hee...hee...hee....
Keep our daddy in Ohio in your prayers; name's Don. Having difficulty in breathing, at doctor's office now. Will keep you abreast as to what's going on....:(
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn.