This poem summarizes what I have felt over the past few months as we tried to complete our home, move, and get settled. Everything else went by the wayside as we tried to focus on our goal and complete our task. And now...finally...I can see the rewards are more than I had imagined.
Oh you poor thing, so much to endure and yet through God strength was felt and absorbed for you to continue on. An inspiration to all who may be about to give up....
Cryssa, this is magnificent! You must publish it! It is so uplifting and inspiring! Reminds me of when I bought my first home,and the struggle to renew it etc. Could never have done it without the Master Builder!;-)
I like the idea that everything, experiences, daily life, moods and feelings can be turned into poetry because that's just in the way you look at life and life always has that poetic quality.
So this is what you are doing here, with your energy and faith that - I believe - are part of who you are and how you write.
A beautiful analogy, Cryssa. This has a lovely lilt and effortless flow. Now to enjoy the fruits of your harvest, not least of which is a teachable spirit which gives us all seeds to sow. Welcome to your new vineyard! :)) xx
Dear Cryssa, You know how happy I am for you. We missed you and missed your enthusiasm. You expressed the right thing to do when we have a task to achieve. We just have to start and not give up. The strength will come with our courage, tenacity and resolve in order to reap the fruit of our labors. Welcome Back. Love Emile
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2008
Glad to see you back,and yes hard work always pays off...great writing sweet lady...be well and always safe...HUgssssssss
I was just thinking about you, Dear Cryssa; glad you are okay! A most beautiful garden you've planted in verse; brava! Nice to see you here; you have been missed!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
...and all that from a real, for true farm girl--and it rhymes too! A lot of truth in your lines (rows?) No white flags up... blessings must have reached the end of every one of those furrows. --Charlie
Wow, this is true belief in our creator and what he can do. His love can get us through anything, conquer anything, overcome anything and this poem shows it and says so. What a WRITE! Faith of a true child of God. Love, Bonnie
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So this is what you are doing here, with your energy and faith that - I believe - are part of who you are and how you write.
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(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
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