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How Many Pennies Does it Take, Daddy?
by Bonnie Lou May → (All Poetry by Bonnie Lou May)
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With the economy the way it is, I wonder how it affects the children.


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How Many Pennies Does it Take, Daddy?
 
 
“How many pennies does it take daddy, so mommy doesn’t cry?”
“She’s so very unhappy and sad daddy, am I the reason why?”
“Do I cost a lot of money daddy, I really don’t need my toys.”
“I want to see my mommy smile; I need to feel her joys.”
 
“She takes me shoppin daddy and cries over things we can’t have.”
“Not like ice cream and chips, its bread, milk and healing salve.”
“She stands there for a long time with tears on her cheeks.”
“She needed that healing salve daddy, for the pain in her feet.”
 
“I’m so sorry daddy if I’ve been much trouble and I eat a lot.”
“I won’t eat today daddy, I’ll be satisfied with what I’ve got.”
“Just make my mommy stop crying daddy for it hurts my heart.”
“I have some pennies in a jar you can have, is it enough to start?”
 
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Bonnie May

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 Reviews of "How Many Pennies Does it Take, Daddy?"
Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on October 3, 2008
This is a very sad one, so heart-touching. Once again I see you putting yourself in the place of another's suffering.

Good job, Sis,
Connie

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on October 2, 2008
Children have pure hearts. This is most wonderful and the message so clear.
Ditto to Karla's comment.
CarolHawks

Reviewed by Susie McCray (Reader)
Reviewed on October 2, 2008
Very nice, Bonnie. This almost make me cry.

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on October 2, 2008
A sad reality in this world especially for a child.I have to say that you are a talented poet because of the fact that you write this poem as if you were a child and you can reach into a child's soul and get inside of what they are thinking with their innocence and wonder.Take care of yourself.
Love and Hugs
Edwin

Reviewed on October 2, 2008
Agreed: should never be. The children; the poor; the elderly; the disabled will reach a hand out quicker than a rich person will. :(

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 2, 2008
Lack of money for essentials & such...don't remind me...Ed

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 2, 2008
...through a childs eyes,,, how sad is this,,,should never be.
Love, Christine

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 2, 2008
I can remember during the great depression how little there was to go around and how hand me downs were the order of the day. Insightful look into the mind of a child as they feel the pain for the tears of the mother.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on October 2, 2008
Tears up my heart. Liz

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on October 2, 2008
Bonnie, Bonnie, Bonnie... you are indeed a genius with the pen...but especially a genius mind... and heart... lindalaw

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 2, 2008
Oh my God, it has started? when children understand wrong, are this not the time to start listening for those Four Horsemen coming?

Georg

Reviewed on October 2, 2008
Heartwarming yet sad; it's so sad when the children start worrying about the economy!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

I changed the font color (darkened it) on my story; just thought I'd let you know! :)


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