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An Old Love, Your First!
by Bonnie Lou May → (All Poetry by Bonnie Lou May)
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This brave lady handled it a lot better than I would have. Haven't figured out yet, what I'd do.


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An Old Love, Your First!
 
What do you do when your first love calls you with words that shock your core?
Telling you he’s never loved another and searched for you once more.
He informs you how the memories of you are destroying his entire being.
And he’s regretted throughout his life, letting you go without truly seeing.
 
Do you let him continue for he’s saying everything you once needed to hear.
Or do you stop him dead in his tracks by making your feelings clear?
At one time you might have even wished this day would finally come.
Where he too felt the same pain you felt till you eventually went numb.
 
Oh, he had your heart in his hands and he played you like a fiddle.
Is he now saying all these things, thinking you were still so brittle?
Doesn’t he realize you’ve moved on to a love that was meant for you?
Does he think you’d give all that up for a love that you once knew?
 
It’s time for you to stop his humiliation by not letting him say anything more.
For when he left you in such pain, he truly nailed shut that revolving door.
 
I must stop you sir, for you have called a wrong number.
That woman who loved you back then was truly encumbered.
She went through a cleansing to remove you from her heart & mind.
She is a totally different person now and one who’s doing just fine.
 
She has found a beautiful new love, a love that’s been true blue.
Her memories of the past are gone, as is her relationship with you.
So I’d advise you to stop looking for her and not call here anymore.
For there’s nothing left in her for you or what it was like before.
 
Written by,
Bonnie May
 
 
 
 

 


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 Reviews of "An Old Love, Your First!"
Reviewed on November 13, 2008
Bonnie,

Absolutely beautiful!! Your quilled pen is truly sharp!!


Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on October 26, 2008
love is a wonderful thing -- truth and honesty are remarkable things -- without which, love cannot exist -- peace to you Bonnie -- JMW

Reviewed on October 19, 2008
Wonderful. This shows the reality that exists in the world of love. thanks dear Bonnie

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 18, 2008
And there is when she came from a family that never let go their hold using malicious venom until they destroy the relationship between one of their own with an intruder that will not bend nor break to their sick pressures.
The final bill is paid with children.

Georg


Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on October 17, 2008
I was blessed, I married my first love!
Enjoyed this writing Bonnie
CarolHawks

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 17, 2008
I have experienced this and must confess I did hestitate if only for the briefest of moments, the guy that was in love back then still wondering but the guy of today stood firm.

Fee

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 17, 2008
Gotta, to a degree, feel sorry for him, though he made the mistake in the first place...

This reminds me of my relationship with Rene, she & I knew each other well in High School, but just to get out of our hometown, she married a guy and moved away even though, according to her, she loved me still...but he didn't work out, physical abuse and such, and now she is back with me, to a degree, and we enjoy each others company again...GOOD WRITE...Ed

Reviewed on October 17, 2008
It's sort of sad, but you have given him the proper advice. If he had left you before, he would likely do it again. Some men who constantly looking for love are men of insecurity. They would always look for someone new!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on October 17, 2008
Once a player always a player! I am so glad she didn't fall for his line again and sent the deumb ass packin! GREAT POEM! LOVE! SC

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 17, 2008
So I’d advise you to stop looking for her and not call here anymore,
For there’s nothing left in her for you, or what it was like before.

And it very sadly works both ways. I got a similar call, from my first wife, who couldn't wait to get rid of me, so many years ago.

And it's often extremely sad for both male and female, when one has moved on with their life, and the other hasn't.

Reviewed on October 17, 2008
Sad write, but so very well done, Bonnie; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(


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