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The Mightiest of Swords
by Bonnie Lou May → (All Poetry by Bonnie Lou May)
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Life is stressful and hard but when your raising a child on your own, sometimes is unbearable...for the parent and the child.


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The Mightiest of Swords

 

There was a very young mother left all on her own.

To raise a dear little girl until she’d be fully grown.

The mother was kind and compassionate for all others around.

But fear and anxiety build up in her heart, once being sound.

 

She started to take her anxieties out on her precious child.

Not one physical blow was thrown, only words that defiled.

Not a scar was seen on her from her head right to her toes.

As the sweet little girl took all her mother’s verbal blows.

 

O, but they were there deep inside where not a soul could see.

Eating away at her tender self image, self confidence and glee.

 That beautiful precious child starting gaining lots of weight.

Protecting herself from the blows that became so angry & irate.

 

Her mother never meant to hurt her, she just needed some release.

From the trials and tribulations of life that never seemed to cease.

She never thought her words meant anything above all causing pain.

To what her little girl experienced when her child was not to blame.

 

That beautiful little girl disappeared more and more each day.

There was only an empty shell of her just standing in her stay.

Those lovely little smiles that used to come to her so easily.

Now came less often and more remote for any outsider to see.

 

Then one Sunday morning, the Minister read from the Holy Book.

Saying, “The tongue is the mightiest of swords,” and that’s all it took.

The Mother looked at her little girl whose tiny head was bowed in prayer.

She got up & led her child to the alter and laid it down right then and there.

 

Written by,

Bonnie May

 


 

 


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 Reviews of "The Mightiest of Swords"
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on January 21, 2009
Words have such power...
Cryssa

Reviewed on January 21, 2009
Our words are either weapons of good or evil, sometimes we tend to forget that, and anger comes out, we say things we later regret and in the end we end up hurting those we love, thank you for the much needed lesson in this. My Mom and I were talking about this very subject yesterday, it is no doubt in my mind that the Lord brought me here...Thankfully my Mom and I have a very close relationship, but I felt at times I was verbally abused by my Father!
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on January 19, 2009
very little bites and nibbles away at the tender heart of children like a parent's abasing comments -- the damage is often irreparable -- and the child becomes the parent performing the same horrible ritual with their offsprings -- such a sad tale of woe -- another excellent piece of advice to young parents Bonnie -- peace love and joy to you -- JMW

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 19, 2009
Bonnie, you have such a gift for compassionate poetry,reaching deep into our souls.You represent those whose needs are misunderstood by many,with your keen insight! Excellent, honest poem! Eileen

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on January 19, 2009
I have a hard time understanding abuse toward a child...verbal or physical...breaks my heart! Single, married or what have you it is not acceptable and there is no excuse in my book...as you say...God..and resources are out there we must all help those in need..Great write my friend.
Love,Christine

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on January 19, 2009
Your writing skills are above average, and in the midst of all these wonderfully talented writers..you still stand tall. Another wonderful, inspiring write. hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on January 19, 2009
Wonderfully written with a message I hope those parents take to heart!

Reviewed on January 19, 2009
Bonnie~!

You are an exceptionally talented writer, and this penning clearly shows that talent!! BRAVO!!


Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed on January 19, 2009
I wouldn't want to be a parent, particularly in this day and age. Powerful write, Bonnie; keep on educating and informing!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on January 19, 2009
Thanks, Bonnie, for reminding us that the tongue that
can comfort can also destroy. -gene.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 19, 2009
Too late to be read by my mother, but I pray that a few to be that kind of "mother" read it and don't yell curses and beat their children afterward, because a son is telling not to do it.

Georg


Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 19, 2009
Let us pray that this poem will be seen by those who need to read it and change their ways with God's help. May God comfort those abused children.

Reviewed on January 19, 2009
Words can cut deeper than the sharpest edged sword ... I know. :( Powerfuly penned message in these lines, Bonnie, well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 19, 2009
So sadly true that mere words often cut much deeper than any sword.


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