bend with thoughts to twist and spiral. Roots once planted reach with velocity as if it was a tornado heaving upward like an open palm reaching to the God's -- funneling for truth.
There it waits - and seeks a moment for a seed of acknowledgement only to find an eternity of silence that echoes across skeletons.
Weeping and wailing puddles from torrential storms and subsides to the sun scorn. Clouds once darkened change form and bow to visions of a double rainbow where leprechauns dance in silent sympathy.
And grief - for a moment changes to accept the future as is, forever changing.
Great poem
This one seems like it is coming from another place inside
I like how the thoughts are sort of compact (less wordy but saying so much more) The only nit I have is the end. The furure can change all it wants but I would rather just forgo the future and live in the grief. it seems it is where I am most of the time anyway
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Tracey and it's very wise.
This one seems like it is coming from another place inside
I like how the thoughts are sort of compact (less wordy but saying so much more) The only nit I have is the end. The furure can change all it wants but I would rather just forgo the future and live in the grief. it seems it is where I am most of the time anyway
This is Really Excellent! Painful, yes, but enlightening
at the same time...and isn't that it? The paradox!
Sending you positive vibes!
Thought provoking and powerful are your images and words--thank you!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
Good to see you!;-)
Eileen
reach with velocity"
What a great image! Then you add more strong images. This is excellant.
Love Tinka