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Would He
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Would He

Sunrays penetrated tripartite panels of smalt,
emanated hues of blue to patterns limbate.
Silence filled the cathedral as Gods words echoed,
within lost souls trepidations sear to perplex thoughts.

Without brevity, verses insinuated equivalent powers
between dimensions, the pernicious oeuvre of man.
If the chosen one was not scrupulous or aspirer
evil would no longer be diminutive but predominate.

Would the chosen one bequeath the honor,
instilled with fear succumbing like prey to its predator,
or would he proclaim his destiny with the "sword of truth",
slaying "the fallen angel", ending the holy war?


© 2002 Tracey Hardie


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I realize that this poem may not be so easy to read due to the wording. It was written to a word challenge. So, I have taken the liberty to define some of these words.

tripartite: divided into three parts.

smalt: a deep blue pigment used especially as a ceramic color and prepared by fusing together silica, potash, and oxide of cobalt and grinding to powder the resultant glass.

limbate: Botany. Having an edge or margin of different color.

oeuvre: French. 1.A work or art. 2. The sum of an artist's work.

pernicious: tending to cause death or serious injury: deadly.




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 Reviews of "Would He"
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2002
Beautifully done!

Reviewed by Energy Shifter (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2002
Very well done

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
Reviewed on May 29, 2002
I ditto Ed.
Josie

Reviewed by Tomas Ughdair (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2002
Hi Tracey,
Did not have any problem with the words.
But the picture intrigued me,
It did not look like Michelangelo's work,maybe one of the other artist's of his time,Is it one of the lessor Sistine Chapel works,
Morchuis,
ps what is word challenge?

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2002
Great write Tracey and thanks for the words.. :)

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2002
you did well with some problematic words.

Reviewed by Dark Stranger (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2002
some excellent word usage...
enjoyed how you danced this one


an old professor once said
write with the words that 99%
of the folks will understand

then 99% of the folks will read you
and know what you said

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on May 29, 2002
Extreamly well written.
Powerful as well...

Reviewed on May 29, 2002
This is too good a work. I respectfully admire its style and message. Thanks.

Reviewed by John Reilly (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2002
this makes me nervous
interesting write my dear


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