of all the thangs, that cover me
it's human stains, that i yearn to be
drenched in, baby follow me........
(see this is where time flies and he catches me slipping)
(see all he had to do is ask me about my eyes, say something bout’ my mind)
(see give me his ear and a little of his time, his hands were firm smelt like a man)
(see his teeth were so happy and smiling at me, offering paradise fulfilling means)
(see I heard it between those words, smiles, laughs, baby I’m gon make U luv me)
Ok back to the poem
I think of bodies tangled
Mangled in juices flowing
Your upper thigh holding my bottom thigh
Pressed chest to chest
And the sky cries
Purple blue sapphire
Pulling my arms high
Cupping meaty desire
As I sink into you
Twisted vines growing
Into shadows in time
Grinding inner to the core
Yes the source of life
It is calling you home
And you journey long
And swift determined
Home
One twenty
One twenty
One twenty
Our hearts beat to
Souls crying and lost
Bumping and humping to connect
Making mates
Can you feel it?
Ow baby can you feel it?
Blooming brought out senses
And our colours mixing’
Yours skin calls out to me
Midnight
For shadowed dreams
Of bodies in motion
With elegance in my stance
Striking poses in this dance
Of hitting switches
Gripping each side of my spine
Death takes over my mind
Slow death, slow
You hold me like a new born child
Whose return and left her smile
Death finds you buried
In my chest searching
For heaven
Bending into you
I have no choice
We explode and families grow
No matter…….
Lips hotly dry
Despite the tears from my eyes
Never knew lust
Could feel just as good as love
Brotha your male principle
Spreads me like butter over toast
Opening
Growing
Swelling…you go
So deep and so low
Our lips meet tongue to cheek
You suck life from me
And I open
Effortlessly
As the colour green
Spring free reaching for
Growing for
Arms curled locking mid way stations
In place and you lick your plate
Clean so clean
Cheer teams dream
Of moves like this
Up and around and flip
I cover you warmth
Turns your red to blue
Deep under hills of motion
I travel flicking the backdoor wide
He is shy
And I have always been good at ping-pong
I mock his earlier strides
When rides were upright
And his moan covers my dome
Which only encourage
More
Death comes swift
And I take every inch
Drenched
Us both
With life processing stench
Covered in glistening drains
And the remains of human stains
And my goodness
If he isn’t my soul mate
He sure feels like he is………..
I agree with what Felix said - "this has such an erotic yet sweet innnocense to it as well that the reader is not sure to feel so happy for her" I'm amazed at how tastefully this was done. Sandy
Phew! what a hot poem. I can all but see the steam rising. And like the rhythm and the insistence and the repetitions and to borrow a phrase, the complete evaporation to the core... love is just a four letter word. Very physical poem, red-blooded!
Funny Thing Bout Human Stains,No Matter What Color You Are THEY NEVER (Sin)WASH OFF----Until Death Inevitable Smell Stench While You're Burnen In Holy Hell_
somebody come and help me here!!!....zowwwwwwwwwwie,you can't be writing like this while I'm here all alone. at least wait til I tell you he's home Mitzi;-)never read erotica like this before, like coke it's the real thang!
Mitzi this has such an erotic yet sweet innnocense to it as well that the reader is not sure to feel so happy for her (the subject) or a sense of wanting to reach out and protect her from loves entanglements. Glad at the end he is a life mate.
Felix
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2005
You have some nasty, rough and tumble phrases and words sprinkled all over the place here, but then, damn, that's what I expect from Mitzi. Would have been disappointed without them. Your ride with lust, your mouth tasting the syrup of male pride and your loins rising to gather around you everything that the world has to offer you at this delicious moment . . . Well, hell, when you are there, there is the absolute best place to be.
Early Works is an exhaustive compilation of the first decade of the poems and stories of Z.B.McClure. Included are family photos, rare personal photos, photos of 1st draft manuscripts of many of his early poems. Also some biography and memoir materia
Ron
truly could not stop once I started
William ......Peace & love
God..........the is GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lololol
ahhhhhhhhhhh
pax A
Nobody writes with more real, raw emotion--stunning write!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
Love Tinka :}
Joking apart, this is such a unique write.
So glad to be new to this den.
Had to laugh out loud at the last line..
Credit For Off Wall Romantic Write...
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