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Me and the stars
by Anna Lisnic → (All Poetry by Anna Lisnic)
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Just another thrilling poem... I hope

Look at these stars! They are rushing to us
Like quarreling pigeons awaiting for food.
They fight for the kisses we've thrown to the grass
And wandering footsteps you've left in the wood.

Now tell them the things you are saying to me;
That people grow older and feelings decay.
Say you don't love me and then you will see
That all of the mooncrocks will beg you to stay.

Go on and destroy those, who love you the most.
Despite all the bridges you're ready to burn
I'll come every night to this place on the coast
And stars will be waiting for you to return.

You say to yourself you approve what you do,
You can disregard every evening and kiss,
But me and the stars will be waiting for you.
We'll never believe you can leave us like this.

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 Reviews of "Me and the stars"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 10, 2008
You write sweet poetry, Anna. Love and peace and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 5, 2008
Strong emotions running throughout, yet I sense the hope that will see you through, beautifully written....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 5, 2008
Anna,

A beautiful but sad write. Some never realize what they have until they have it no more. They can miss their mark by an inch or by ten feet but either way they missed it. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by John DeDakis
Reviewed on February 4, 2008
I liked this, but it seemed a little bumpy in places. For instance, "awaiting for food" seemed just a tad clunky. I think you can do better. I KNOW you can do better. Ok... feel free to hate me. JD

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 4, 2008
Sad little poem, some peeps have it all then hit the self implode.
Fiction, yet faction too. wel said, many will relate...

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on February 4, 2008
Very beautiful poem

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on February 4, 2008
An eternal love that stays in all seasons. Enjoyed


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