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An Erotic Halloween Poem
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He followed her into the dark room
Restless with anticipation
He wanted her
With every breath in his body
He was almost panting
So hot he felt his shirt
Clinging to his back
He had never wanted a woman so much
With so much intensity
He felt that if she touched him
He would explode
Into
Billions of white-hot pieces
She looked so cold
So remote
As she stood there with her head bowed
Her skin like white porcelain
Her lips blood red
He felt dizzy
Why did the thought of blood
Suddenly make him feint
Why did he think of blood at all
Why did he now feel so cold
As she turned to him
Wrapping her arms around him
She sank her fangs quickly and painlessly
Into his neck, suckling gently at first
Then hard as she pressed
Her cold body into his
He felt himself stiffen even more
His breath became labored as he strained
To press closer to her
Wanting to possess her, to throw her down
And ram himself into her
He groaned and spasmed
As he gave her the last of his juices
In rapid hot bursts
While she took the last of his blood
In rapid hot spurts
And he died
Before she had even turned away

 

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 Reviews of "An Erotic Halloween Poem"
Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
Reviewed on January 12, 2006
Erotic and chilling ... wow. Atleast he did happy, Sue. Lol.

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed by Mary Quire
Reviewed on October 31, 2005
Nicely done. Very erotic...vampires have that way of projecting that type of sensuality.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 30, 2005
Graphic and thus captivating, Sue. Thank you for sharing this seasonal offering. Love and peace.

Regis

Reviewed on October 29, 2005
Wonderful sexy write. Hot indeed! Some consider this is the best way to go!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on October 28, 2005
She was truly "to die for" I guess. Hot and erotic Halloween poem, Sue.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on October 28, 2005
Yep, that was definitely AN EROTIC HALLOWEEN POEM, hot, bloody, and deadly:-)

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on October 28, 2005
This piece shows your talent for intertwining two genre. It is extremely spookey.

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on October 28, 2005
awesome imagery

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 28, 2005
Whata way to die....not bad methinks...lol!!

Well done!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on October 28, 2005
DEADLY ENTRY!!! Anne Rice would be proud of this one. Great climax building to its end, Sue!

Sage


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