I ran across some poetry i wrote when i was a teenager and other than the fact that i didn't know how to write without rhyming, i was fascinated by how little my subjects have changed.
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Reviews of "The Genie"
Reviewed by J John (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2002
Enjoyed this write :)... j
Reviewed by Tomas Ughdair (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2002
Hi Sue.
I remember you writing some lovely stuff in rhyme.
Think there is may be, to many bottles in this one,maybe tipple or something to break it up more.
Still excellent.
Morchuis
A homonymless man writes shows what it's like to look up the laid he skirts when you’re lying prone(d) to the sidewalk, beer / joint / needle dangling from your hand /lips / arm.
I remember you writing some lovely stuff in rhyme.
Think there is may be, to many bottles in this one,maybe tipple or something to break it up more.
Still excellent.
Morchuis
Love, Janet xoxoxo