I was a little girl when I first discovered
That I had to write, couldn’t stop myself
At first it was just my name, all over every space
Drove my family and teachers crazy
But it was my start, how can I ignore it
Later came pretty poetry about butterflies
And unicorns and angels, can’t forget the angels
I wrote endless crap that rhymed and made
My teachers and parents proud, but somehow
Never satisfied me at all, I liked the attention
But I knew it was garbage and I knew they knew
About that time life showed me that butterflies
Were bugs and unicorns didn’t exist and we
Just won’t discuss angels yet
My poetry became dark, rhyming still but not
Pretty, not something my parents wanted to read
But by then I was out in the world and I wrote for me
Endless pages of words, trying to express the pain
The discovery, the excitement, the dismay of growing up
Years later in college my writing took another turn but
Trying to write free style, I was lost and so I gave up
Unhappy with rhymes but not getting the flow
At least I gave up showing it to anyone, I could not quit
Writing was something necessary to life, so I wrote
Two years ago my daughter introduced me to a place
Called your-poetry and eventually authorsden
And I started reading free style poetry, really reading it
By people like me, not people who lived in some other
Time, I discovered the flow, I discovered erotic poetry
I discovered the poets who write it all so well
And my life has changed for the better because of it
So my point you ask, where is all this going
I just wanted to say, I’m writing about angels still
And everyone of you qualify, you enrich me, you
Encourage me and God Bless everyone of you
You are my angels
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Reviews of "I Still Write About Angels"
Reviewed by Morchuis
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
Hi Sue,
No come on,thats a good girl.
Just explain this free verse thing one more time.
Consonants,Resonance,Alliteration,Rhyme, Rhythm,Pentameters,Sprung Rhythm, Eye Rhythm,Internal Rhythm, etc.etc.etc. my head is spinning.Did some one mention the Popes Rhythm.
I am still stuck on the word Poem.
But I have made one discovery,It does not really matter what you write,--out there some where, there is a Book called the critic's bible,in it there is every word a critic could ever need to describe what is wrong with a poets work.
Personally I think it could be come a best seller, it only has one flaw,it does not appear to give the exact definition of the word poem.
Two years!!!!!!!!!! does'nt time fly.
Just like Angels.-Morchuis
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
You are my Angel. I am blessed by your presence at AD. When I read your fascinating work, I know I am reading the best available. Love Bill
Sue,
I think you have found your flow! This is moving! My family still does not understand my poetry, but its a good thing...they never know when I am writing about them! lol!
You said what we all feel Sue, it is a great place to share and feel the camaraderie that permeates the Den.Yu are a fine writer and are right there with the best of them.
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2003
A wonderful emotive write Sue..I get much from sharing what I write as with reading everyone else....Write on....Dani
Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2003
I'm glad the world lightened up for you.
Peace,
Cherokee
This exceptional book, Celebrating the Gift of Being Alive, has the perfect thoughts and words for birthdays, graduations, engagements, marriages, and any life celebration or family tradition.
These song lyrics and art are tales, tides and twinkling lights - tunes telling stories of warmth and sun, city and sand, paths that lead, and the coins we can keep in the Karma Bank. Spirit's been bypassed for sorrow, dreaming of a better tomorrow .
No come on,thats a good girl.
Just explain this free verse thing one more time.
Consonants,Resonance,Alliteration,Rhyme, Rhythm,Pentameters,Sprung Rhythm, Eye Rhythm,Internal Rhythm, etc.etc.etc. my head is spinning.Did some one mention the Popes Rhythm.
I am still stuck on the word Poem.
But I have made one discovery,It does not really matter what you write,--out there some where, there is a Book called the critic's bible,in it there is every word a critic could ever need to describe what is wrong with a poets work.
Personally I think it could be come a best seller, it only has one flaw,it does not appear to give the exact definition of the word poem.
Two years!!!!!!!!!! does'nt time fly.
Just like Angels.-Morchuis
I think you have found your flow! This is moving! My family still does not understand my poetry, but its a good thing...they never know when I am writing about them! lol!
Hugs,
Maria
Reindeer
Excellent, true feelings expressed, thank you.
Nancy
Peace,
Cherokee
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