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Bricks
by Diana Wiles → (All Poetry by Diana Wiles)
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The writer reflects that her way of protecting herself emotionally, is no different in reality from the way he protects himself.

The 'phone goes down,
The tears fall,
The sadness aches inside my wall.
The bricks I've built
To save me Hell..
No different from his
Cold, hard shell.

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 Reviews of "Bricks"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on September 13, 2022
THE ONLY WAY FOR TWO 'BRICKS' TO COME TOGETHER IS BY APPLYING THE 'CEMENT' OF PATIENCE, KINDNESS, AND UNDERSTANDING. THAT IS...IF THE 'BRICKS' DECIDE THIS OPEN PATH TO LOVE...IS WORTH IT. LOVED IT! LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on April 9, 2017
This hits the gut.

Reviewed by David Thompson
Reviewed on March 30, 2009
You have displayed such strong emotion in this one, Diana. My heart aches for all you are going through right now.

David

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on January 31, 2009
Oh, this one speaks volume! It leaves the readers more to ponder...

Sandie Angel :(

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
I suppose we all put walls up with some of the people in our lives. Sad when it's with the one we long to love freely and openly.
I like the form you've used here, and the brevity only adds to the importance of the story.
Welcome to AD!
Connie

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 8, 2008
Sharp and real; hurts to the core. Thank you, Diana. Be well and I wish you love, peace, and all that is good,

Regis

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on March 3, 2008
ouch, direct hit

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on February 26, 2008
Much said in just a few words...
The walls we build to protect ourselves really only tend to isolate us.

Cryssa

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 26, 2008
Perhaps it is time to begin chipping away, another chance on the horizon, nicely written....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on February 26, 2008
This poem reminds me of another here at AD -- check out Leo Durrant's "Diamonds and Dust" when you get a chance.
Ironic, isn't it? We tell ourselves what we need to do to protect ourselves from the ogres, and find that in the self-protecting, we become ogres ourselves... --Charlie

WELCOME TO AD! See ya around the den.


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