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she smiles
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on too rare days
I round a drab hallway corner
and see her

or perhaps

we take the stairs
both wisely forsaking
the office elevator

and our eyes meet

and she smiles

no doubt I am getting
the same smile
everyone gets

the same eye contact

but there is such warmth
in her smile
and such life
in her eyes

that my chest gets tight

she might be
twenty years wiser
than some of the other
terrific smilers

maybe even thirty

but she is

I think

quite possibly

the most beautiful woman
in that entire building
 

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 Reviews of "she smiles"
Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on November 9, 2009
And this is a beautiful poem. Your insights into this lovely woman are endearing, as she is.
I wonder if you are still here; I hope you are still writing.
Connie

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
Amazing how a smile can conjure fantasy, as well as warming ones heart. A smile brightens even the most dreary day. You need to post more poems on the Den.

Kathy

Reviewed by Lynn Barry
Reviewed on August 6, 2006
Smiles do tell. Very nice.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on July 15, 2006
I accidentally stumbled across this and am so glad that I did!

Susan

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on March 28, 2006
So romantic...

Reviewed by Missy Cross (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2006
The brilliance of a few precious moments, made eternal here. This is lovely!

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on March 25, 2006
This is so sweet... real, raw, and honest. Nice work, Fritz.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on March 24, 2006
Such beauty and charm in this romantic write...
Peter

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on December 8, 2005
I am touched! What a romantic and
beautiful poem, to the lady of
your world! She is the most important
thing, is she not? Go for it!
Cordially,
Becca Lang

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on February 24, 2005
Wonderful write....BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2005
A gift indeed.....

Very special work....

ty, Dani

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
I agree with Angela.. I think she knows.. You have a romantic heart.

Reviewed by Angela Rhodes
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Here's the thing about smiles like that; I don't think you have to tell her. I think she knows. Look how many people this poem has reaching! What a gift...

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 19, 2005
The beauty that comes from the "inner smile" only deepens and accentuates with the passing of time, moulding the outer features to accommodate it better... a wonderful tribute and a touching portrayal that is so cleanly and honestly portrayed. There is amazing lightness and gracefulness about this. Well-crafted and "real". Thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on February 19, 2005
Our spirit is perpetual youth and YES it effuses from within and spills over into a mature face..oh how delightful it is to bear witness to the miracle. I wonder... what will you DO about 'this smile' that reaches into your heart hmm?..think about it..

Exquisite piece..I'm impressed.

vesna:)

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on February 18, 2005
Men should learn to let such women know their smiles mean so much.
A delightful poem, Fritz.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on February 18, 2005
that is beautiful that you noticed and dropping a note to let her would more than likely make her day
enjoyed, sure she will too!!!

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on February 18, 2005
This was really outstanding.

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on February 18, 2005
i'm glad someone appreciates that beauty doesn't die with years, but just changes a bit. this is a wonderful poem

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 18, 2005
I know the feeling. Beautifully done, Fritz. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Reviewed on February 17, 2005
Yes, a very delightful piece to read! Thank you. :)

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on February 16, 2005
a delightful write...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 16, 2005
Beautiful! Like a scene out of a play...very charming!

etw

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on February 16, 2005
I love this as well and what a wonderful message this sends.

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on February 16, 2005
Oh this is wonderful!
Love it!!!

like a mini movie........
pax A


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