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7...8...9...U P Before the B E L L
by Phyllis Jean Green → (All Poetry by Phyllis Jean Green)
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...oh dear, that ditty 'lonely little petunia in an onion patch' has started running thru my mind. 'But seriously, folks. . .'
;)


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      . . .7. . .8. . .9. . .UP Before the Bell!

A single blade of grass, crushed and bleeding,
shivers and pokes it head through muck.   Single
tap by a lone hailstone pummeled it to the mat
for rain to pound.   Blades on every side
fell and sank or washed away.  Widespread
drownings and death by lightning:  CNN.

Sun finally wins over clouds, starts to melt
stones and dry-clean swamps.  Blade hears a rip
as it twists all the way free,  but gasps a breath.
Feeling comes back.   Pain is a wild boar
readying foot-long teeth.  Somehow the blade
pulls up and takes stock.  Am I all right?
goes the drill.  How can I go on with so many lost?
Why did the storm choose to maim them?
Best troops died.   Here I am, this sick shade
of green.  Puke with hair.   Looked scrawny before
it thundered.   Crooked as a stomped petunia.
Most who died were tall and strong.  Good-
looking, did their job.  Packed on the chlorophyll.  
Tell me it makes sense.  Sun’s warm, though.
Warmer every day.   Rain has learned to
chill a little.  Smells like the first dew of April.
Honeysuckle, fresh ground.  Who would have thought 
I’d fill out?    Believe I am sprouting buds
might just turn into robin’s-egg flowers.   Oh,
they will be small.  They will be shy.  Sun is going
to dim as winter winds down-river.   Leaves
will land on dirt hard as rock.   Each other.
Most are bound to smother.   Most are bound
to crack beneath wheels and feet.  Surrendering,
every single blade will add to a boring brown mat. 
Mat will grow stout, then thin and disappear. 
But now it is summer.   Grasses have a duty
to provide cushions.   Beautify and shelter
those who must stay undercover.   Better
make food and distribute it fast.   Clouds are
dressing in the dark.  Gird yourself for hail.


(c)  Phyllis Jean Green,  May, 2005

 

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 Reviews of "7...8...9...U P Before the B E L L"
Reviewed by Barbara Henry
Reviewed on April 17, 2014
Nature is very much alive in this well written thought provoking poem. Such wonderful imagery! So much to appreciate in nature. You have provided an extraordinary perspective on nature.
Thanks for sharing,and continued success.
Barbara J. Henry

Reviewed on May 20, 2007
KUDOS TO YOU MY FELLOW POET
ON YOUR OUTSTANDING WRITING.

Reviewed on June 18, 2005
A wonderful write here, excellent.
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on June 16, 2005
Rich from the mind of a rich soul.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2005
Fantastic nature write and exploration of thoughts and emotions.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on June 14, 2005
A fantastic microscopic eye's view of living life large, Phyllis. We would learn so much about how to survive and thrive if we just stopped to look either up or down from time to time... instead of inhabiting the mindsets of the vast and largely vacuuous space in between which we have filled with our own meaninglessness! I love this - well observed and documented in the most thought-provoking way. One of the leading literary poetry magazines here in the UK is looking for contributions on the theme of "moments of obscurity outside Warhol's fifteen minutes of fame: the unnoticed, the ignored; an interstice between two blades of grass in a municipal park; an arm cuaght in the background of a photograph; the extras in last night's film..." - this would suit well. It is highly prestigious to get into it, so I would love to see a contact of mine in there! :)) Deadline mid-July. www.magmapoetry.com. Best wishes! Kate xx

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on June 14, 2005
An outsatnding write
thanks for sharing

William ....Peace

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on June 13, 2005
Phyllis,

I like this, it is layered and deep, always something that intriques my in poetry! And love your intro!

Reviewed on June 13, 2005
Hi Phyllis:

It's been raining and thundering lightnings here a while ago in Toronto, Canada. One lady in her 30's was struck by lightning in downtown Toronto. What a day!

Wonderful write!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on June 12, 2005
Excellent!!!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 12, 2005
You have exposed the power of the "small" Phyllis. Nicely done. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Sandra Corona
Reviewed on May 31, 2005
Beautiful and belated Happy Mother's Day :)!
:)Sandy

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on May 30, 2005
This reads on so many levels, like peeling an onion or when those nasty little catepillars who fall from their cocoons and have turned into raving beauties that we are in awe of. Your poetry is like that, so friggin' deep, if you keep looking, digging and once in awhile we let our hands get dirty, we find a real pearl, something unique.

Love, Janet xoxoxo

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on May 29, 2005
Oh if we all had the sense of purpose and determination of a single blade of grass, what a different life we might lead. I am always amazed when I see a blade of grass that has grown through concrete or through a rock. Perhaps the reason that the grass was able to do it was that nobody remembered to tell him he couldn't do it. Wonderful write, Pea with so many vivid images.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
Excellent write Lady Pea!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on May 28, 2005
powerful imagery; excellent poem, sweet pea! brava! very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D


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