You went straight to the point. This is a wonderful piece.
Thank you dear phyllis.

Abdullahi

As a lover of short verse, I have to say that I LOVE THIS SHORT VERSE!

your right and you've done it up here
very well said and felt
good reading you again

short and to the point

Ooooooooo a biting feel to this one! Perhaps time to move on.......

Be safe,
Karen

Sounds like an ending to a much pondered question, or situation! Enjoyed this well written write, much for the reader to ponder here!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Afraid I didn't make it plain that the poem is not about me, personally. Like a lot of my work, this poem is f i c t i o n. The emotion is genuine and the metaphor true to my experience, but. . .I guess you could say that the piece is comparable to a very small painting of a scene that I pulled out of imagination. Impressionism, e.g. Thanks to all of you for reading and commenting upon this
and other efforts. Sunny Skies* and Balmy Breezes, 'Pea' <3
...*Throw in a spot of rain down Carolina way.:)

Wow I call that florist and complain
about delivering half-dead flowers but late well
It's better late then never,it's the though that
Really makes a difference Right
Nonetheless this poem speaks loud
And clear and painful thoughts of an end.
But i think forgiveness is in your soul
Love And Peace to you always
Your friend...Morning Star many many Hugssss

Oh precious, Phyllis, it's the thought that counts, right? We must forgive the timing...perhaps weather conditions were to blame...or the delivery person had a mishap...or...you know, forgiveness really is heavenly bliss! :)

Much love and twenty hugs
Lena

well said, lady j

Deep and silently painful write that says the end in a strong way.

Fee

((((Pea))))

I hear ya. (((((HUGS))))) and fresh blooms for me sweet PEAPOD!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Awwwwwww??

I knowthat feeling all too well!!

Love Tinka

I know the feeling.............

Thanks, Pod