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Woman Shaped World
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Whatever you may think of this experiment, it calmed me to write it. Spent all day yesterday at UNC Hospital's ER re Ray having nearly sawn the tips of his right thumb and forefinger off! Other 'stuff' goin' on...par for L i f e, yeah. [Ray's hand will be bandaged and splinted a while, but things appear to be going in the right direction. Hand specialist did the surgery, e-t-c. Know more Tuesday. 'Least he's got Happy Pills.
Just felt some of you would want to know. No, k n e w.} Love, Pea


Poem Artwork

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                   o f
             a   w a v e,     o f
    a   w o -
                m a n,    o f
 
w a n d e r I n g   w i n d   a n d    w o n d e r
 
i n g
                      m i n d;
        o f
                                        t h e  w r i t i n g.
 
o n    t h i s   w a l l
      o f
                    m o u n t a i n s,    o f   o c e a n s ,
     
                                                 a n d    s h o r e s ~                
 
                                                      O f      
W   o   m   a   n    Wi t h  a  C a p i t a l   W
                  
         c u r l e d   i n   a n d   a r o u n d  
                             E a r t h ‘ s
w o m a n l y   c u r v e s,
 
                             W o m a n   w h o   b e a r s     
        w o m a n,.   W o m a n   w h o
                                          b e a r s   M a n,
 
a l l  b o r n i n / o v e r / u n d e r / a r o u n d
                            f a r   
                            t o o
                   s        l        o       w       l       y        yet
suddenly          r o u n d i n g   e v e r y   r o u n d                        
                                            
                                                     c   u   
                                               r   
                                                        v  
                                                    e  
                                                    !


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 Reviews of "Woman Shaped World"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on November 4, 2007
Great. Good to hear Ray has happy pills. Liz

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on November 4, 2007
You create the view of the cleverness and the creativeness of a Woman ... they shape the world just as they create it....

nice work...


Art Sun..

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on October 27, 2007
Neat and creative. Caution: Curves ahead. Drive at your own risk!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 22, 2007
Pea,

Your picture and poem bring many visuals to mind but mostly Beauty and Gentleness. Hope Ray is feeling better. Take Care Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Katherine Tracy (Reader)
Reviewed on October 20, 2007
Your poem is Fantastique! Thinking of Ray and always Sweet Pea!
Love you, Rhi

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 19, 2007
beautiful write-i hope Ray is okay-be well-karen

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 19, 2007
Wow, what can I say but oh so very creative.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 19, 2007
Pea your creativity here is awesome, considering what Ray went through and you of course as the woman that is always there to share and care...Best wishes and prayers for his hand to be renewed!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on October 19, 2007
Adore this creative write Pea, a new look for you. Gentle good wishes of Ray's swift recovery
love and peace, Carole~

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 19, 2007
Very creative and expressive, Pea. Nicely done. Best regards to Ray as well. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on October 19, 2007
Great curvy Womanly write -super, i'm just editing a Womanly one i wrote a while back about Her graffiti, like this one curvy one very much..Woman Shaped World - may She continue to have more decision making opportunities in Her society, for starters i reckon it would be easier to get a buggy and kids onto public transport most places if She did!! Enjoyed, Nicky x

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on October 19, 2007
Best wishes to Ray, Pea. This is an interesting poem and paints a wonderful picture of the tasks and abilities that women possess. We are interesting in our own right!

Thanks,
Jill

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on October 19, 2007
Pea, give my warm get-well wishes to Ray. Woman Shaped World is a statement in womb life-giving. We are all born into this world by a Woman and so yes, Woman with a capital W should be honored, revered, and respected, but too many times she's not...when it happens, Woman with a capital W stands her ground and will not be walked on...

Love, your gliterati gay Hollywood starlet with silver wingtips on her lavender boots, tie-dye me a T-shirt today, Pea, my sparkler rhinestone twin! Kiss Taylor baby for me.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 19, 2007
Pea this is as lovely to look at as it is to read and your words stir up all kinds of inner thoughts and memories that journey me down the pathways of the past where so many women made me who I am. Well done.

Fee

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on October 19, 2007
Very creative writing, I enjoyed. Wishing the best for Ray.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on October 19, 2007
I enjoyed this, experimental or not, a very curvy write indeed.

Walt

Reviewed by Marcia Duning (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2007
Sorry about Ray. Did you forget my email? :)

Reviewed on October 19, 2007
Holysmokes, (((Pea))),

This is a whole new direction for you: but I love it! Absolutely gorgeous!! Well done.

Sorry 'bout Ray (((gentle HUGS))) for him. And lots more (((HUGS))) for you, just 'cause!!

Love,

Karla.


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