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Going-Away Song
by Phyllis Jean Green → (All Poetry by Phyllis Jean Green)
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Long ago and far away, I dodged a bullet. Took way longer than it should have for me to see how lucky I was to get dumped. Dude was bad news!! (Still a kid my only defense.) If you relate, sing along! xOx P xOx


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                  Going-Away Song
 
Time to make a felony of breaking a heart
and waltz off without looking back.
Judge knows all about being kept in the dark.
Lyin' like a rug, and that is a fact.
 
It is now a crime to lead a person on,
Judge and jury of your betters agreeeee.
Sentence to lie alone dawn after dawn.
Beg to be forgiven on your kneeeees..
 
Justice demands that you wear an A
and write a bunch of times you're ashamed.
Hurt people who love you, you gotta pay.
News flash:  love is not a gaaaaame.
 
Don't expect sympathy;  we all know
you broke every promise you made.
Had your highs, here come the lows.
As for parole, gonna be a cold day.
 
Don't expect visitors in prison..
Entered and broke too many hearts...
Think parole 'til you are dizzy.
It is your turn to stay in the dark.
 
Goodbye and good luck with your new career.
Work hard, get t'be a trustee, some such..
Split before the sentence -- twenty years?
Ask me, it's not nearly enough.
 
Picture me making love all I want
when not singin an dancin up a storm..
Get out, just pull the same stunt.
Joke to talk like you will reform.
 
Ohhhh, it is a felony to break a person's heart
and waltz off without looking baaaaack.
Judge knows all about being kept in the dark.
You're lyin like a rug  {join in, everyone}.
To quote the D.A., 'ass a fac' !!.
 


      (c) Phyllis Jean Green, February, 2008


 


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 Reviews of "Going-Away Song"
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
A powerful write, well written in a unique style my friend, very creative and clever! Great expression, touching yet sad...a broken heart hurts like nothing else. It should be a crime to inflict such deep and scarring pain upon another's heart. But I am a firm believer in what goes around comes around...many times their guilt consumes them, only they try not to let it show on the outside. Well done, a thought provoking write!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Powerful. Towards the end fore she departed
she was bangin everone.
I wonder if her new love knew it.
Suprise, she married him and 7 years later
found him laid up with nother in a motel.
What goes round comes round.
Ron

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on February 8, 2008
I love it very uniquely writing
Very emotional and sad song of broken heart!!
Beautiful vividness and imagery
Love that flow!!!
Peace Love and hugssss...Morning Star

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on February 8, 2008
Excellent pen as always..stay safe and well....HUgssssssssss

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
Your talent shines in this piece of a broken heart. Fantastically original and oh so creative, great work....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
I agree with Karen, Pea. This is very creative, and soooooooo emotional. It should be life in prison for breaking a heart knowingly. This piece is well written, fast moving, and captures the reader, especially when we can identify. Thanks for sharing Pea.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), little sister, Barbie

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
a very creative and well thought out sentence--very approprite!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
Bravo. Right on. Write on. Liz

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
...well penned...words that stick in ones head...not going away...truth in the tune.
John

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
Love it Pea, a great spin on a broken heart and I can even hear the tune rolling through my mind.

Fee

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
'ass a fac' Pea LOL
it is a felony to break a heart!

Reviewed on February 7, 2008
Great writing, Pea; very well penned! BRAVA! Thanks for the smiles; glad you made it through the stormy period! :)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
Now Phyllis, tell us how you really feel. LOL...Seriously, good write, fun to read.

Cheers,
Dan


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