Long ago and far away, I dodged a bullet. Took way longer than it should have for me to see how lucky I was to get dumped. Dude was bad news!! (Still a kid my only defense.) If you relate, sing along! xOx P xOx
Going-Away Song
Time to make a felony of breaking a heart and waltz off without looking back. Judge knows all about being kept in the dark. Lyin' like a rug, and that is a fact.
It is now a crime to lead a person on, Judge and jury of your betters agreeeee. Sentence to lie alone dawn after dawn. Beg to be forgiven on your kneeeees..
Justice demands that you wear an A and write a bunch of times you're ashamed. Hurt people who love you, you gotta pay. News flash: love is not a gaaaaame.
Don't expect sympathy; we all know you broke every promise you made. Had your highs, here come the lows. As for parole, gonna be a cold day.
Don't expect visitors in prison.. Entered and broke too many hearts... Think parole 'til you are dizzy. It is your turn to stay in the dark.
Goodbye and good luck with your new career. Work hard, get t'be a trustee, some such.. Split before the sentence -- twenty years? Ask me, it's not nearly enough.
Picture me making love all I want when not singin an dancin up a storm.. Get out, just pull the same stunt. Joke to talk like you will reform.
Ohhhh, it is a felony to break a person's heart and waltz off without looking baaaaack. Judge knows all about being kept in the dark. You're lyin like a rug {join in, everyone}. To quote the D.A., 'ass a fac' !!.
A powerful write, well written in a unique style my friend, very creative and clever! Great expression, touching yet sad...a broken heart hurts like nothing else. It should be a crime to inflict such deep and scarring pain upon another's heart. But I am a firm believer in what goes around comes around...many times their guilt consumes them, only they try not to let it show on the outside. Well done, a thought provoking write!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Powerful. Towards the end fore she departed
she was bangin everone.
I wonder if her new love knew it.
Suprise, she married him and 7 years later
found him laid up with nother in a motel.
What goes round comes round.
Ron
I love it very uniquely writing
Very emotional and sad song of broken heart!!
Beautiful vividness and imagery
Love that flow!!!
Peace Love and hugssss...Morning Star
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on February 8, 2008
Excellent pen as always..stay safe and well....HUgssssssssss
I agree with Karen, Pea. This is very creative, and soooooooo emotional. It should be life in prison for breaking a heart knowingly. This piece is well written, fast moving, and captures the reader, especially when we can identify. Thanks for sharing Pea.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), little sister, Barbie
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Blessings,
Joyce B.
she was bangin everone.
I wonder if her new love knew it.
Suprise, she married him and 7 years later
found him laid up with nother in a motel.
What goes round comes round.
Ron
Very emotional and sad song of broken heart!!
Beautiful vividness and imagery
Love that flow!!!
Peace Love and hugssss...Morning Star
Be always safe,
Karen
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), little sister, Barbie
John
Fee
it is a felony to break a heart!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Cheers,
Dan