Ah, we are rain, rain, we
dissolve as one dissolve
hair and ties, dissolve
difference, dissolve traps
known as trappings
deleting greed to make space
to meet safe to feel
that we do not need
to solve every problem
by our selves rain,
sweet rain, and find us
at last what we lost
yet not to the point we lose
who we are. You
again rain rain again
(c) Phyllis Jean Green
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Reviewed by Mike Ill (Reader)
Reviewed on May 16, 2003
i think I know why i'm always lost for words when it comes to reviewing your works. you have this certain..something. don't know what it is, but I know i want it! It's like wisdom-but with sprinkles, and a lightheartedness that perfectly complements seriousness. Every art, whether it be Martial or Fine, is about finding a balance and you have found it.
nice write, phyllis! :) (((HUGS))) like the rain, too, but it sure does play havoc with my arthritis! :(
Reviewed by Jessica Stanfield (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2003
THIS IS VERY NICE!! I LOVE the rain. You might like my poem, "Standing in the Rain," if you appreciate the power of rain the way I do. This piece is very nicely written!
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