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Mermaid Half a Morning
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The words sent her into the rain, and the rain welcomed her
by walling to a cave.  But the rain could not stop
any more  than she.  Filled her lungs, then her throat. 
The pain in her right side was the stab of a gill pushing out.
A gill stabbed her left side as it, too, budded and bloomed.
Blind now, but beginning to see as she had never dreamed,
as eyes never could, she stopped running so her feet could join
and wave.  Her eyes swelled as water and greenery swirled
together a home.  Sound muffled, then echoed, then dissolved.
And she swam until she could not swim any more,
then she floated.  But floating became too easy,
and the words were able to break through the surface and head straight
for her.  For her, she decided to let herself sink
to the bottom.  Sea weed began to throttle her,
and creatures she felt but did not see twined around
her joined feet, then her ankles.  They were starting to strangle
her hips when she happened to open her eyes
and see that light had also broken through and dived
until it found her.   And the light was strong.
And the words turned out to be weak.
With her last breath, she pushed her way up
determined to find the source of the light.
And she did.  And it was her.

 

 

Phyllis Jean Green, November 22, 2003

 

 

 

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 Reviews of "Mermaid Half a Morning"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on November 23, 2009
Very creative, Phyllis!
Sheila

Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2003
Exceptionally beautiful poem. Who painted this nice painting?

Greetings.

Goreja.com

Reviewed by Paul Bruce (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2003
Great poem and the artwork to. Paul

Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme (Reader)
Reviewed on November 26, 2003
Pea - this was brilliant :0) Love ya!

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2003
Both poetry and art are awesome.....truly inspiring write.....ty, Dani

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2003
Applause!!!!!!

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2003
I love this poem and the art.

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on November 23, 2003
Bravo! Loved this.

Carmen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 22, 2003
I can so relate to your mermaid!!

Thanks for sharing this...it's a keeper for sure!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mike Ill (Reader)
Reviewed on November 22, 2003
the depth of your knowledge really shows on this one. "self-help" is a perfect category! thanx!
oh, and i found a picture that shows alittle more of my face. come check it out sometime

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 22, 2003
A dream vision a quest and lovely prose...Wonderful Pea!About the moon pic, a friend in Washington state near Canada sent it to me last winter. To me it is magnificent. He knows I use photos, and love the moon;-)

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on November 22, 2003
I liked this...seeking the light from within...excellent

Allen


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