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Twilight to Who Knew in the Land of Long-Ago
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While I'm not what you could call a good-old-days fan, there was something about playing outside on a summer night before necessity coined the term stranger-danger. As it got harder to see, the world took on a kind of fuzzy glow, and you felt like you could win the fastest race. But I should let the poem speak for itself. Hope you like it. 'Pea' : *)


Once there were open windows and unlocked doors.
Summer evenings drew out like musical scores
created during low-key swings in elm-strung hammocks.
The smacking sound was a softball bat lobbing
a homer out of a hollyhocked alley or a vacant lot.
Occasional scream a child letting herself be chased
during a game of hide-and-seek. Shouts were joy
out on a lark; hunting trips reserved for errant baseballs
and empty Miracle Whip jars to store lightning bugs in
as long as they could breathe. Just enough car exhaust
wafted to lend piquancy to lilac, gardenia and marigold.
Marigolds ick, but fresh-mown grass and the healthy sweat
of children switching to playing Roy and Trigger
and the odd late supper of home-grown, hand-shelled peas,
new potatoes, butter beans and fresh bread go miles
toward making us forget what won’t be forgotten.
Screen doors scraw open, shut, open, shut, open
as Heinz 57 dogs and kids conveniently deaf to
adult shouts, and porch swings and rockers sough-
saw-sough beneath grown-ups raring back to trade news
liberally spiced with gossip in voices taking their time
while keeping eyes out for the kids. Dark won’t be a problem.
Big, farm moon beginnin’ t’peek through threads of color.
Quiet slips in on tiptoe. Why, you could hear a rabbit hop.
Think I do, and it’s in your Victory Garden!
Teasee would run and check but nothing makes the mouth water
like ice tinkling in a pitcher on a summer night. Jooooooooohn-neeee.
Oh, Joooooooooooohn-nneee.
Got leeeeemooonaaade. Suuuuuuuuuuuzie, Suuuuuuuuuzie,
come hooooooome. Everyone laughs at the idea
of a kid pellmelling home for the privilege of being told
it is time for bed. What are you, a hundred?
a neighbor cracks to a calling father. Ain’ ya heard?
It’s the good ol’ summertime. Let them stay out
a little longer. Think you were never a kid.
Were you? Tired chuckles chuckle. A radio
announcer’s honeyed vowels drift through screens --
Don Ameche? -- but most folks turned the racket off.
Too nice a night! Might even need a blanket.
By the liiiiiight, someone croons.  of the siiiiiil-ver-ee. . .
Tomorrow? Tomorrow can take care of itself.
Got skeeters t’fan away. Got pillows to get right.
All we plan to count is blessin’s. Amen to
that brother. Amen to that, sister. One life to live,
let’s live it here on the porch watching twilight thrill
to shades of blue and purple studded by more stars
than ever. Ahhhhhhhhhh, it feels good
to get off your feet. Ahhhhh, the way an unclipped hedge-
rose goes to your head when stirred into White Shoulders,
Old Spice and Sir Walter Raleigh. All a body needs.
is the rhythm of a long, slow sunset followed by a long, slow tune
playing in earth’s most popular night spot.



 

(c) Phyllis Jean Green, March, 2004

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 Reviews of "Twilight to Who Knew in the Land of Long-Ago"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 8, 2004
very well written ...

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2004
You've done a synopsis (almost) of my childhood, and
have done it to perfection!

Reviewed by Eddie Thompson
Reviewed on March 7, 2004
story within a poem within a lesson....nicely done as well.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2004
I became a tow-headed, bubble-gum chewing, lad from South Arkansas as I read this wonderful piece. You may not be "a good-old-days fan," but one could never believe it after reading this poem.

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on March 7, 2004
Great story! You made me see it and feel it. I was transported Phyllis, I was there. Oh yes... I remember those summer nights! Thanks for this gem.

Carmen

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2004
Reflections are what make our lives from day to day, because we learn from them. Great write

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2004
This took me behind in time....though behind I was ahead in many ways...FANTABULOUS writing, Phyllis!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 6, 2004
Memories are wonderful and you express this so well in this creative piece, Phyllis. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2004
Wonderful write that brings many pleasant memories to my mind. Thanks!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 6, 2004
A beautifully spoken memory, Phyllis, one with sounds of longer ago than I care to recall, but so much fun those times were, no fear, no stress, not even for parents, all was much more naive' at that time. Kids today may be more technologically advanced, but never would you hear them say, "mom can I stay out in the rain a bit more?" Oh no, maybe more like, "Mom can you drive me here and there?" Yes times keep changing, for the better, in some ways, but the old memories are still there as long as folks like you are there to remind us...

And excellent write, & memory of the Land of Long-Ago...
Such a nostalgic feel to this piece, now you got me thinking of summers on the beach, rafting, body surfing, water ice, pogo-dogs etc, hope you don't mind my rambling... Peace thru Good Memories, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Gaylen Sharp
Reviewed on March 6, 2004
This one made me homesick. You have truely done did a gooden.


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