While I'm not what you could call a good-old-days fan, there was something about playing outside on a summer night before necessity coined the term stranger-danger. As it got harder to see, the world took on a kind of fuzzy glow, and you felt like you could win the fastest race. But I should let the poem speak for itself. Hope you like it. 'Pea' : *)
Once there were open windows and unlocked doors. Summer evenings drew out like musical scores created during low-key swings in elm-strung hammocks. The smacking sound was a softball bat lobbing a homer out of a hollyhocked alley or a vacant lot. Occasional scream a child letting herself be chased during a game of hide-and-seek. Shouts were joy out on a lark; hunting trips reserved for errant baseballs and empty Miracle Whip jars to store lightning bugs in as long as they could breathe. Just enough car exhaust wafted to lend piquancy to lilac, gardenia and marigold. Marigolds ick, but fresh-mown grass and the healthy sweat of children switching to playing Roy and Trigger and the odd late supper of home-grown, hand-shelled peas, new potatoes, butter beans and fresh bread go miles toward making us forget what won’t be forgotten. Screen doors scraw open, shut, open, shut, open as Heinz 57 dogs and kids conveniently deaf to adult shouts, and porch swings and rockers sough- saw-sough beneath grown-ups raring back to trade news liberally spiced with gossip in voices taking their time while keeping eyes out for the kids. Dark won’t be a problem. Big, farm moon beginnin’ t’peek through threads of color. Quiet slips in on tiptoe. Why, you could hear a rabbit hop. Think I do, and it’s in your Victory Garden! Teasee would run and check but nothing makes the mouth water like ice tinkling in a pitcher on a summer night. Jooooooooohn-neeee. Oh, Joooooooooooohn-nneee. Got leeeeemooonaaade. Suuuuuuuuuuuzie, Suuuuuuuuuzie, come hooooooome. Everyone laughs at the idea of a kid pellmelling home for the privilege of being told it is time for bed. What are you, a hundred? a neighbor cracks to a calling father. Ain’ ya heard? It’s the good ol’ summertime. Let them stay out a little longer. Think you were never a kid. Were you? Tired chuckles chuckle. A radio announcer’s honeyed vowels drift through screens -- Don Ameche? -- but most folks turned the racket off. Too nice a night! Might even need a blanket. By the liiiiiight, someone croons. of the siiiiiil-ver-ee. . . Tomorrow? Tomorrow can take care of itself. Got skeeters t’fan away. Got pillows to get right. All we plan to count is blessin’s. Amen to that brother. Amen to that, sister. One life to live, let’s live it here on the porch watching twilight thrill to shades of blue and purple studded by more stars than ever. Ahhhhhhhhhh, it feels good to get off your feet. Ahhhhh, the way an unclipped hedge- rose goes to your head when stirred into White Shoulders, Old Spice and Sir Walter Raleigh. All a body needs. is the rhythm of a long, slow sunset followed by a long, slow tune playing in earth’s most popular night spot.
(c) Phyllis Jean Green, March, 2004
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Reviews of "Twilight to Who Knew in the Land of Long-Ago"
story within a poem within a lesson....nicely done as well.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2004
I became a tow-headed, bubble-gum chewing, lad from South Arkansas as I read this wonderful piece. You may not be "a good-old-days fan," but one could never believe it after reading this poem.
A beautifully spoken memory, Phyllis, one with sounds of longer ago than I care to recall, but so much fun those times were, no fear, no stress, not even for parents, all was much more naive' at that time. Kids today may be more technologically advanced, but never would you hear them say, "mom can I stay out in the rain a bit more?" Oh no, maybe more like, "Mom can you drive me here and there?" Yes times keep changing, for the better, in some ways, but the old memories are still there as long as folks like you are there to remind us...
And excellent write, & memory of the Land of Long-Ago...
Such a nostalgic feel to this piece, now you got me thinking of summers on the beach, rafting, body surfing, water ice, pogo-dogs etc, hope you don't mind my rambling... Peace thru Good Memories, Ed & Rufuz
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And excellent write, & memory of the Land of Long-Ago...
Such a nostalgic feel to this piece, now you got me thinking of summers on the beach, rafting, body surfing, water ice, pogo-dogs etc, hope you don't mind my rambling... Peace thru Good Memories, Ed & Rufuz