Touch me...hold me close...take my hand~
Touch my heart ~ Hon, I know you understand.
Touch my body ~ caress my tender soft skin~
Kiss my hungry lips letting your tongue slide in.
Touch me....feel the burning hot desire~
Your fingers fan the flame of my raging fire.
Touch me....take me to the moon with your kiss~
Let me feel all the hunger that I badly miss.
Touch me....don't stop now....we have only begun~
Love me darlin' till we see the mornin' sun.
Touch me....you know I've been needing you~
Kiss my lips just the way you used to do.
Light my fire with your embrace ~ hold me tight~
Feel the passion rising high...Oh, it feels so right.
Skin on skin in the dark ~ darlin' touch me~
Don't you know how much I miss this ecstasy?
You lay here beside me eyes closed in sleep ~
Never hearing or caring the words that I speak.
The only thing I've read tonight, but massively erotic and sensual, not in an overbearing sense, no, much more in a way that expresses the power of passion.
Reviewed by Drkman (Reader)
Reviewed on October 3, 2002
Linda, How did I miss this being posted. What a great piece of work. Sad to hear that some fools never seem to wake up. Great write.
Drkman
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on September 28, 2002
Yes dear, someone just commented there are more than one way to arousal. Arousal when the person wants to be aroused. Hope you get the joy you are searching for. But some of us never find it. And living witout it is unbearable and brings out your private love and private hell to others who can do nothing. Bill Hugs and more hugs. P.S. Sometimes two souls searching for each other always seem to choose opposite directions. Do you know that?
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 28, 2002
Very sensual and longing, WAKE HIM UP!!
Reviewed by Madame X (Reader)
Reviewed on September 28, 2002
Linda, another great write. There is more than one way to wake (arouse) a man. z <wink>
Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on September 28, 2002
This one sounds so true and Linda, I have experienced it myself. A real pain when we need some thing and our best bet does not understand it and we have no where to go.
A shame really But that I think is life
super write, as always, linda!! always enjoy what you do!! i will e-mail you sometime next week; be on the look out for it!! love, your friend, karen lynn. ((HUGS))
someone told me (in regards with my "lovelife") that the ones who love the truest, are the ones who longed for love. so now im passing these words to you. Lol! =) anyways, beautifully expressed.
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Drkman
A shame really But that I think is life
Love from your friend Joel
And oh yes, wake him up!
jing
The Voice
Jenni