Bitter Despair.... (poem) by Linda M Hill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

A powerful and insightful piece Linda.Very well written.

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)

Reviewed on February 20, 2003

Regardless of this being fiction or not, its still a very strong powerful write, well done...take care Linda...Mark xx

Reviewed by Timothy writerwanted@hotmail.com

Reviewed on February 18, 2003

This is so deep and so sad Linda. I'm glad it's fictional. I wouldn't want you to ever feel this way.

God bless,
Tim

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

from within despair we must repair...

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Wonderful write, Linda...
Jenni

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

2-16-03

As Many ways Out Of this World In Pain,Do Remain, For Suicide Is a Quickest Trip Back To This Holy Hell World...

ETAL: They Visitor(Hiding Behind No Name) Can't Read(Between Lines) Nor Even Write__

But, They Can (Assholes)Tell You About a Typo!

Laugh(With Me) I Do,

Your Friend,TRASK

Reviewed by *�*

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Nicely Done, Lindy.

Might wanna fix a typo: 2nd line of 2nd stanza should be "No one to care" not "No one TOO care".

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Really Sad that poets started writing more fictional writes .

Well this was excellent write...
~Sanilnath

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Very emotional write...very deep write...but am glad to know thats its only a fiction...take care....cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Dark but well written Linda.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Love the image.

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

you are an amazing writer able to capture such darkness Wow you are such a ggreat poet and i am so umbled to be friend wow im amazed by this poem it is great you did a wonderful job on it

Reviewed by Amanda Fousek (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Poewrful thoughts, so dispairing! Nice work

Reviewed by J John (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Yikes .. scarey :) well done J & J

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

A wonderful , sad and brilliant write,
is not great to write about some one else's problems???, by placing yourself in a certain situation??

William

William

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

chilling write! wow, you never cease to amaze! love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. (((HUGS))) :(

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

wow, linda...*chilling* and intense. glad it's fiction...but reads like reality. ((((HUGS)))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

I'm so glad its fiction! Well done Linda.
Jack