Are You There? (poem) by Linda M Hill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 25, 2003

Oh the pain of longing hearts.
Hope it ends and loving starts.
John

Reviewed by Ross oatrander

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

Absolutely wonderful write! An angel from the heavens like you deserves to have a man just like the description.I will say no more because you know my feelings about the subject..My sweet precious friend..I love ya!...Ross

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)

Reviewed on March 7, 2003

YOUR POETRY always has TRUE PASSION and makes me dream on to another TIME and PLACE!

I met you on a springtime day, you were minding your life and I was minding mine TOO!
But LADY when you LOOKED my way, I had a strange sensation and darling that�s when I knew.

That it�s sad to belong to someone else when the RIGHT one comes along.
Yes it�s sad to belong to someone else, when the right one comes along.

So I live my life in a drem world for the rest of my days, just you and me walking hand in hand in a peaceful melody, Oh I guess that's all that it will ever be?

I wish I had a TIME MACHINE I could make myself go back until the day I was born, and I would live my life again, so that I�d be yours from now on!

Yes it�s sad to belong to someone else, when the right one comes along.

Reviewed by Red Matrix (Reader)

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

I'm Here! Pick me!

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Reviewed by Bill Murray

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Linda, you know the answer to that question.
I emailed you and asked you what to say? Again, you didn't answer. "I Will Always Love You" is the title in a song, and that is who I am. You can shake your head, pass me by, condemn me, but you will never change what I feel. And it is not a love that I will pursue. It is something that will live and die in my heart. Just know that, "I Am There," and I have alwyas been there, but you stopped seeing me, "Somewhere Along The Line", but the song I wrote says, "I'll Never Stop Lovin' You." http://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewpoetry.asp?AuthorID=7690&id=31971
This is my story and this is my heart; although it means nothing to you now.
Bill

Reviewed by TRASK

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

3-06-03

Yes, There's Man In Universe Not Of This World For You As Well There's A Woman In Universe For Me Not Of This World,i.e. Your Just Rewards Are Not Of In This Physical World__

Unless Your Victorias Secret,Enron,Greed Mongering Corporations,Others That Satan Devil's Owns__$$$ Controls $$$__

Then You Are Of His Family,i.e. His Children__
They In Turn Marry & Create His Greed Driven
Sickening,Hateful, Evil Little Children__

I Think You Get The Gest Of It _

ETAL: (God) Sent Some Good People Here As His Children In Midst Of It All,i.e. Remember (God) Sent His Little (Warriors) Children,as
Most Now Are Grown Big (Warriors)__

And, We Have Good Little Children That Satan Devil Is Destroying, Rapeing, Killing In The Eyes Of (God),He Satan Knows My Little Children Await(Watch) Him As I TRASK He Fears Me More Than (God)...

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Poignantly painful, Linda... I like your formatting. :)

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Love can be elusive sometimes. Excellent poem.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

What am I a lump?
sure there are lots of good man out there looking for your kind of woman.....
you just keep missing each other, like ships in the night.
An Excellent write

William

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

I know that there are men out there like you describe, I know one is looking for you.

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

very sweet and romantic i hope there is a man like that for you for you desrve such a man for being such a sweet angel and a great best friend to me awesome job on this very romantic and well emotionally charged poem

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Are you there ?
Wonderful Question to the public.
Wonderful Write for the public.
There are men who understand the trueness of Women.
There are men who understand the Beauti Of the Heart.
There are men Who go deep into the Heart Looking at her Eyes.
There is Men Who can love Women Like the Real Angel with Lot of Love and care.
But I always feel Love is a subject that is never true.
It always become One sided and never true.
Bcoz i always felt love is something that can never be accepted with mistakes.
Lot of care and affection are indulged in Love. No body understand the true love and romance.
All are selfish and mean to themselves.
I too Loved someone at heart so deeply and i wishedi see her heart looking for hours through her eyes. But she never understood me. why do love play like this ? I really dont understand ... LOL. Still smiling for seeing good heart.
Dont Worry Linda ... You will one day reach at the right person. Wish u find him soon

Congrats for this wonderful write
You are a wonderful writer
You will find the person soon LOL:)
~Sanil

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

I agree with Kate.
She is a sensible woman. [smiles]
And they say fantasy is nonesense.

~E

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Have you lost your mind???
If you find one send me his brother PLEASE...hehehehe.....No I don't think so...
I stick with the one I love...(in my dreams)
Outside the dreams....its risky....I think
Love Tinka

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Ha ha ha ha! Like finding a needle in a hay stack. This is nice. Teresa

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Excellent write Linda

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

You always have hope... there must be some out there.. Great write

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Wow, Linda, You have done it. This is very beautiful and powerful.

Sensitive hearts always feel the pain more.

Love from India - Joel -