I offer this as a challenge...write a poem for your love...tell her/him your feelings...you may be surprised of
the outcome...Come on...you can do it!
Many years have gone by
Since the day we met
Memories of an old porch swing
Where we used to sit
We wrapped in a warm blanket
Watching the rain
We had both been so alone
Hiding behind the pain
I will never forget
The tenderness of your kiss
Holding each other close
Relaxing in total bliss
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Your eyes reflected my love
As you looked at me
Time has woven its fragile web
Now what do you see
Are you happy in your soul
That I wear your ring
Do I still melt your heart
Am I your everything
Have your feelings changed
Do I still belong to you
Do you love me as much
As the day we said "I Do"
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So many shared moments
Linger softly in my mind
You gave me so much love
I never thought I'd find
How fast the days dwindled
Now here we are
Standing side by side
Sometimes you seem so far
Gazing in my eyes
Do you see my tears
Tell me, do you still love me
After all these years
very good my poetic master poetess. Love does sometimes seem to be buried. your poem sounds like my wife but she gets plenty of attention. cheers. G
Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)
Reviewed on November 16, 2003
Linda: So very, very beautiful. You write the MOST beautiful love poems, because you are filled with so much love yourself. Glad to have you as a friend.
Linda, I absolutely LOVE this poem. It's written so beautifully and it expresses what every mate feels after all of their years together, after experiencing what life has to throw at us. I love this and I am going to keep this in my 'library' to read again when I feel the need to be inspired. Wonderful poem, brava! -Jh
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Jenni
Heartfelt, expressive poem!
BRILLIANT work and what a
Challenge for ALL! I shall work
on it!
If I Told You I Cared About You, I'd Be Telling You Truth_
Simply Because Caring, Sharing Is Compassion,i.e. TRUE LOVE!
TRASK
Well I do that daily without any real luck...from the right one!!
So I will just go day by day and hope for the best!!
Love Tinka
Allen
Sometimes you seem so far
Gazing in my eyes
Do you see my tears
Tell me, do you still love me
After all these years
Wonderful write
Your friend always........Ron
I hope you get a big "Yes!"
:)
John
Jack