Depression's Cry (poem) by Linda M Hill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on February 20, 2004

So sad Linda but your poetic expertise shines here. This is a sad masterpiece. Get out of that cage. It will hold you as long as you stay. Physically and mentally. Dare to be different. life might beat you physically but don't let it beat you mentally. As long as you take a negative offering it will consume you, your mind has trained you, when it should be the other way around. cheers G

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on February 18, 2004

I Hope You Are Keeping Your Red Rose In Befroom When You Sleep_

Nobody Knows More About PAIN Than Me,TRASK_

Our Little Childrern Need YOU_

Linda, Lighten Up You Have Much Work In This Ugly Hell Hole World To Do Before You (We) Meet (God),i.e. If I Could Hold Your Hand I'd Take All Your Pain Away!

Tear's,Your Friend,TRASK

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on February 18, 2004

excellent!!!
loved the picture!!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 17, 2004

(((linda)))

graphic and intense--deeply felt--i've been there

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

is all okay with you? write and let me know--i care :(

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2004

You have a way with playing with emotions..this is dark, disturbing and emotive..GREAT write, Linda!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 17, 2004

Describes the horror of depression perfectly! A deep, dark, and disturbing write! I hope your veil of depression lifts soon; I pray for a healing for your mind to God!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx, Karen Lynn. :( >tears <

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2004

So dark and starkly real. Disturbing picture of depression.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on February 17, 2004

I've built these walls all around
No one has ever knocked them down
In my lonely world I stay
Sometimes to withdrawn to pray
The shadows dance as they hear me cry
Darkness beckons my will to die

Linda...such a write of emotions...My prayers are with u my friend...love n luck....BHUWAN

Reviewed by gaurishankar chemudupati

Reviewed on February 17, 2004

clouds of depression rain
when hope as breeze drain!
Oppression the causeof depression
Suppressed inside meek, press
The soul foul, unless
wings of freedom raise decent!
Depression is one's making
Freedom from it is his will as well!

Reviewed by Eddie Thompson

Reviewed on February 17, 2004

Powerful expression of emotion in poetic form. You possess a strong talent for the language. Thanks for posting this poem.

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on February 17, 2004

A heartbreak of a write.
I hear you.
We just have to remember there is a seed of hope planted somewhere in our hearts.
XXOO!!
John

Reviewed by David Mohd

Reviewed on February 17, 2004

Oh Linda,I oray for u............forever.
with love
david

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 17, 2004

The sorrow in my heart grieves for thee.