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i think most ppl have that friend that could possibly be "more"...

Let’s start with a simple question shall we

How great do think we could be?

I think we could be really marvelous

Lack of love would starve us

But I see my future in your eyes

I don’t care about the what ifs and whys

As long as we keep it real and no lies

I mean we’re friends but why can’t we be more?

Why can’t we just let emotions pore?

Stop worrying about what people say and think

Stop worrying about what happens when you blink

As long as your head is above water, you won’t sink

And you mean too much to me to let you sink

Once again…

Why can’t we be more than friends?

All I want is a chance

Your life I want to enhance

I don’t know if it’ll last a lifetime

Or be as short as this rhyme

But that’s a small risk great reward option

So what’s up baby, let’s get it poppin’

Not to sound arrogant, but I want to show you a real man

Someone who is not afraid to hold your hand

I’m tried of going through these flings

I want the woman who invades my dreams

Let me see that grin

Why can’t we be more than friends?

 


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 Reviews of "More?"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 2, 2008
I can certainly relate to the theme of this write, Dennis. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
How can she resist? :) I have had good times and not so good times expanding friendships, and you brought back memories for me with this real love poem.

Reviewed by Nisa Howe (Reader)
Reviewed on September 28, 2008
A question you dared to ask ot loud that many refuse to as to not lose that gran friendship... I admit, once or twice I thought about it.
Nisa

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 28, 2008
Wonderful, sentimental thoughts, perhaps wishes and sometimes wishes and dreams do come true....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Darryn Murphy
Reviewed on September 26, 2008
Beautiful poem :) Take care

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on September 26, 2008
I love this beautiful poem. Rebecca

Reviewed on September 26, 2008
Dennis,

What a wonderful poem to a woman you love. I guess one of the most irritating question is "Can't we just be friends?" It's hard for a man and woman to maintain a platonic relationship when they are close.

Excellent Write.

Mary

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2008
Oh my,this is so beautiful sweet man..go for it..I certainly would....ohhhhhh myyyy...have a wonderful and safe day Dennis...Hugsssssssss
Love Always,
Chanti lace


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