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I see rain in your eyes.
by Kay P M- Devenish → (All Poetry by Kay P M- Devenish)
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Is it raining there inside you?
It LOOKS as if there's rain,
The way you walk,
the way you talk,
those eyes so deep with pain.

I know you're not the type to cry,
you bear all that you can,
but pain's deep trace engraves your face,
and indicates...'a dam.'

Is it raining in those walls,
those walls of flesh and veins?
There's a thunder when you move,
that says...'INSIDE... it rains.'

Don't let the walls store up your rain,
don't hold it there for years,
open up your window eyes,
and flood out stormy tears.
Un-dam the bolted upstairs door,
let words of turbulence out-pour.
Let the waves inside tide out,
whisper drips, or spurt a shout.

Is it raining in your walls...
those walls that dam your pain?
Release the well,
life's burden tell,
My friend...let OUT... your rain.

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 Reviews of "I see rain in your eyes."
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on January 14, 2012
A FINE INSPIRING METAPHORIC WORK THAT SEEPS WITH THE DESIRE TO HELP AND CARE AND WANT 'HEALING' FOR OTHERS. POETS ARE SUCH SPECIAL PEOPLE... PASSING ON THE 'MEDICINE' THAT HEALED THEM, THEY REACH OUT...
THANKS FOR SHARING THIS WORK, KAY...I LOVED IT! LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Gil Saenz
Reviewed on July 25, 2004
Hi Kay,

Very nice poem and theme of rain for tears.

Gil Sanez

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on July 17, 2004
Dear Kay,

To cry helps to cleanse and heal the hurts, and I mean for everyone !!!

Exceptional write.
Warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Whence You Can Shed Tear's Without Crying You Will Have Found (God)_

(God) Does Not Cry , In Pain Only Tear's Flow Down His Face_

But, Holy Mother She Crys,(Little Children) She Is Vicious_

Excellent! Thank You For Your Always Honest, Intelligent Reviews!

TRASK

Reviewed by Anthony Hall
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Kay, this is an excellent poem. I love the originality of it and how you expressed in visual terms the pent-up emotions that can well up in us.
Thank you for sharing this,
Anthony

Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Exceptionally penned, this prose shows great depth and wonderful verse - enjoyed!

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
I feel like you wrote this for me.......lol
I know its not the case but I am saving it...........
and will track you ........

very talented write and thinker that you be

ty A :)

Reviewed on July 9, 2004
Ah Kay, this was so caring and wonderful, beautifully written poem,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on July 9, 2004
You are a warm and caring person. It does
rain when the sadness moves. This is beautiful.

Reviewed on July 9, 2004
(((kay)))

uniquely presented and very well written; BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on July 9, 2004
This is absolutely beautiful.
Very well expressed. It does not make sense to keep the negative feelings inside. Let them out!

Reviewed by Michael Curry
Reviewed on July 9, 2004
Such a wonderful piece! A good lesson in this one for all of us.. especially us guys... who still think it might show some weakness. Nicely done!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 9, 2004
Amazinzg write Kay!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on July 9, 2004
Outstanding write! Well done, Kay!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 9, 2004
Kay, an excellent way to put this, emotions from the inside out, such a great idea, you sure I didn't think of it? :) Had me bawling in my cereal...Peace, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on July 9, 2004
Kay, this is a very powerful, teeth clenching, hand gripping, polished piece of descriptive poetry, pouring off the page into eternity, Poet!!!… Outstanding work!!!… Bravo!!!

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on July 9, 2004
reminds me of a piece I wrote called "Brief Calm" re: letting the "rain" fall and cleansing the soul! Nice write.

Reviewed on July 9, 2004
Kay, Excellent write!!! Loved the way this flowed (no pun intended)

...Michael

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on July 9, 2004
Words of wisdom. We're so accustomed to walk around carrying our burdens locked up inside, we're walking bombs -- best to let it out, though life often doesn't allow us to do so. Thanks for this post.

Carmen

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on July 8, 2004
Wow Kay...amazing write. So many hold in their emotions which only hurts them more. I say CRY CRY CRY...release it....even the men. Men stand taller to me when they cry and show their emotions than try to be a macho man and hide them. Amazing write, my friend.

~Linda

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 8, 2004
those walls that dam your pain? Great verse Kay..
Wonderful caring write......

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on July 8, 2004
Nice easy flow of compassion and sweetness, Kay. Well done.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on July 8, 2004
A caring and deeply compassionate poem , which brings a tear to the eye !!!

Peter Paton

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 8, 2004
the heart of a caring poet is always so refreshing ... keep that heart flowing ...

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on July 8, 2004
Oh Sweets, this is lovely, compassionate, caring and all that you are.

Much Love, JC xoxoxo

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 8, 2004
This has been beautifully written from your caring heart.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 8, 2004
An extremely powerful piece, Kay, with a magnificent message.

Glad you reposted this!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 8, 2004
Kay if you knew what this says to me! What a super-fantastic
write!You have such a compassionate knowing heart! Kudo's!
Thanks for being you and for all of your encouragement and support.
You have no idea how much it means to me! You my friend are a treasure!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 8, 2004
Soul-gripping verses, Kay. I relate to this well. Love and peace to you. Regis


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