Freedom.. (4 lines.) (poem) by Kay P M- Devenish on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 11, 2005

Freedom
just a state Of Mind ... ?
loved this

William .....Peace & Love
Happy Holidays

Reviewed on December 11, 2005

Right on !! <3

Reviewed on November 23, 2005

Short, simple, and wise revelation. Difficult for someone to write a short poem that impacts so strongly. You did it and made it look very easy.

blessin's Sis Kay
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by Steve Ralph

Reviewed on October 18, 2005

It still amazes me how you can say so much in so few words Kay.

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi

Reviewed on October 2, 2005

Profound write, ay! We hold the keys to everything - but somehow we always seem to believe that the next person is responsible for our lives. We have to look within. Beautiful write!

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on October 1, 2005

The one truth it is hardest to find and to use, I think! At least, the head might understand it, but the distance between the head knowing and the heart feeling and putting into practice might as well be from here to eternity, sometimes. A most wonderful four lines, Kay. I wish I could say as much so effectively in 40! Bless you, Kate xx

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on September 12, 2005

Kay,
Quite a satisfying realization.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on September 7, 2005

Oh Kay, loved this, beautifully insightful!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on September 7, 2005

It's me too..
Happy to see you there by
the water fall..
Love ya!
SMooooooooooooo000000000000CH!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on September 6, 2005

Short and to the point...I am still searching for the internal key, I know I put it in there somewhere...;) Ed

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on September 6, 2005

That introspective moment when everything suddenly makes sense. You have penned it well, Kay.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 6, 2005

You rock girl...thanks for telling me now....send me that ME-key okay!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on September 6, 2005

says much, katy; very well done! brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on September 6, 2005

Very wise indeed, Kay! Thank you for sharing your gift of insight. Love and peace to you.

Regis

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Reviewed on September 6, 2005

EXCELLENT!!!

well written. well said...well read.
TX

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 6, 2005

awesome!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on September 6, 2005

Yup. Happens like that all the time. If you can't look within for that key it will never be found. Powerful.

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on September 5, 2005

NO BODY CAN FREE ANYBODY. EVERYBODY MUST LOOK FOR THE KEY TO FREE HIMSEL/HERSELF FROM THE PRISON BUILT WITHIN HIMSELF/HERSELF.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on September 5, 2005

You are a treasure Kay! Brilliant succinct poem!