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For My Daughter.
by Kay P M- Devenish → (All Poetry by Kay P M- Devenish)
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For my daughter.









She carried me along on her skirt hem

(though she knew it not)
I held on tightly

trying not to be seen or felt.

A stow-away...

I followed her life's steps quietly,

I've soared high on her heels.

Clutching by my heart 

I've awed at her many triumphs.


My daughter,

she loved me always

and
even though I did not always 'belong'

she carried me with her
to the palaces and thrones
of far lands

where I silently listened
and learnt.


And it was she...my daughter,
who took me with her

(on her heart)
and I loved her dearly,
sweetly,
but humbly
for her soul forgot me not...
even though
I was... and am…
so well worth forgetting.

My daughter carries me like

those clinging-barnacles on mammal flesh

Yet
she knows not that she does
nor

does she know
how great she is
or...

how intently masterful ...or kind.


She is the giant I follow...

clinging on her skirt of life…

I am there...
holding on

I am the barnacles breathing through her existance

...

unworthy yet eager

I adhere and cling

content to follow upon her hem

where 

riding so proudly

I watch 

her swimming forward

through this ocean of never ending waves.

 








         
 
 
 
 
 
 
 


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 Reviews of "For My Daughter."
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on January 24, 2012
THOUGH ALL OUR BLUNDERINGS...ALL OUR MISFITED EFFORTS OF 'REARING'...IT IS EVIDENT, THROUGH OUR OFFSPRING'S ABILITIES TO NAVIGATE THIS CRAZY WORLD, THAT WE MUST HAVE DONE 'SOMETHING' RIGHT! THANK GOD!!! A WONDERFUL SHARING, SO ENJOYED. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Steve Ralph
Reviewed on January 11, 2008
Absolutly beautifull Kay, this is indded a masterpiece, written from deep within the heart, Alex should be proud of both it and you as I am sure she is,
Your pommy pal Steve

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on January 2, 2008
I have to second what Elizabeth said...

Not one of God's creations is made, unworthy.
This is a beautiful write with sad undertones, as I know too, "Lord, I am not worthy, but only say the word and I shall be healed"
I would have to say, your seed could have never blossomed so beautifully, without your soul to nourish it into the women she is today!
I so see a different women here...in your soul filled pen...

Keep writing and never stop!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 1, 2008
This is a fine gift for your daughter, Kay. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace and best wishes for the new year,

Regis

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
Reviewed on December 31, 2007
Dear Kay, I have one daughter too, she is my life and your poeme is inspiring and flowing like the water in the river. Happy New Year for you and yours. Emile

Reviewed by Joyce Devenish
Reviewed on December 30, 2007
Hi Kay,
Good work.
My daughter is pretty good too. Happy New Year...JDM

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 30, 2007
Wow...flows well with such splendid metaphors and analogies that my mind seemed trapped from beginning to end as I contemplated the mother's wonder of her daughter

Fee

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 30, 2007
Great tribute Kay!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on December 30, 2007
She truly must be special...

one can see this within your poem...

Nice...
enjoyed, Art Sun...

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 30, 2007
No kids left on this end but they are a wonder sometimes, aren't they...e

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2007
Your daughter is a gem. You are too Kay..
Thank goodness we had kids?
With love
Ron
Have a Prosperous & Healthy 2008
Ron

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2007
Kay, that is such a beautiful tribute to your daughter. I would not at all call you unworthy. No one could write as you do so from the heart and not have a great deal of worth on any stage of life.

Elizabeth


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