THOUGH ALL OUR BLUNDERINGS...ALL OUR MISFITED EFFORTS OF 'REARING'...IT IS EVIDENT, THROUGH OUR OFFSPRING'S ABILITIES TO NAVIGATE THIS CRAZY WORLD, THAT WE MUST HAVE DONE 'SOMETHING' RIGHT! THANK GOD!!! A WONDERFUL SHARING, SO ENJOYED. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Absolutly beautifull Kay, this is indded a masterpiece, written from deep within the heart, Alex should be proud of both it and you as I am sure she is,
Your pommy pal Steve
Not one of God's creations is made, unworthy.
This is a beautiful write with sad undertones, as I know too, "Lord, I am not worthy, but only say the word and I shall be healed"
I would have to say, your seed could have never blossomed so beautifully, without your soul to nourish it into the women she is today!
I so see a different women here...in your soul filled pen...
Keep writing and never stop!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Dear Kay, I have one daughter too, she is my life and your poeme is inspiring and flowing like the water in the river. Happy New Year for you and yours. Emile
Wow...flows well with such splendid metaphors and analogies that my mind seemed trapped from beginning to end as I contemplated the mother's wonder of her daughter
No kids left on this end but they are a wonder sometimes, aren't they...e
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2007
Your daughter is a gem. You are too Kay..
Thank goodness we had kids?
With love
Ron
Have a Prosperous & Healthy 2008
Ron
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2007
Kay, that is such a beautiful tribute to your daughter. I would not at all call you unworthy. No one could write as you do so from the heart and not have a great deal of worth on any stage of life.
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Your pommy pal Steve
Not one of God's creations is made, unworthy.
This is a beautiful write with sad undertones, as I know too, "Lord, I am not worthy, but only say the word and I shall be healed"
I would have to say, your seed could have never blossomed so beautifully, without your soul to nourish it into the women she is today!
I so see a different women here...in your soul filled pen...
Keep writing and never stop!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Regis
Good work.
My daughter is pretty good too. Happy New Year...JDM
Fee
Love Tinka
one can see this within your poem...
Nice...
enjoyed, Art Sun...
Thank goodness we had kids?
With love
Ron
Have a Prosperous & Healthy 2008
Ron
Elizabeth