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The silly little fish.
by Kay P M- Devenish → (All Poetry by Kay P M- Devenish)
Wednesday, July 25, 2018    Rated "G" by the Author.
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There was a silly little fish
who would not learn THIS rule,
THAT:
'NEVER should a little fish
wander from his school.'

One day a big bad fisherman
was fishing in the brook,
when silly-billy little fish
swam close to take a look.

He saw the lovely juicy bait
( which hid a nasty HOOK )
so greedily he took a bite
(and took,and took,and took.)

Suddenly there was no bait...
instead...
it was the hook he ate!!

Now the 'fishie's' in the fridge,
tomorrow he'll be fried,
if only he had learnt The Rule
he never would have died!

So if you have been told a rule
don't be a naughty silly fool,
remember it well and learn it please,
or else one day ...
you may be 'freezed !!'   

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 Reviews of "The silly little fish."
Reviewed on July 29, 2018
Very good !

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 26, 2018
If the kiddies get the lesson, they won't be tempted by "bait" that is out there in the pool of life and stay with their school for protection.

Unfortunately, most of them will think it's about fish rather than a lesson about them and their behavior.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on July 26, 2018
One day your the big fish in the pond, and the next day you're on a plate with a side of tartar sauce.

Reviewed on July 26, 2018
It is always good for children to learn about the fish and the rules. However, in reality, some rules are not to be followed blindly. Some rules are made by humans to control others and such rules are meant to be broken, as no one would want to be controlled by "control freaks" with power.

Even in a world of fishes, there are some that will swim with the flow, but there are also some jumping fish that are swimming against the cuurents, and such fish would jump and leap up in the air and slap the fishermen's faces for fishing.

Sandie

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on July 26, 2018
There is a bona fide moral to this excellent write.

Reviewed by Eva Pasco
Reviewed on July 26, 2018
It's too late in hindsight!


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