Blue heaped on blue. (poem) by Kay P M- Devenish on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Steve Ralph

Reviewed on September 8, 2007

excellent write Kay, I am very glad it is just fiction, Take care,
Your Pommy Pal Steve

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi

Reviewed on July 16, 2005

Intense, powerful, striking write!

God bless, Kay!

Sandie.

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

Kay,

A deeply-moving, sensitive write ... beautiful!!

Best to you,

Robert

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

So glad to see you posting again. I love your soul and your writing!!!

Reviewed by Victoria Murray

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

This was very moving and powerful!

Hugs,

Victoria

Reviewed by A good friend

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

i am glad this is just fiction too Kay. a perfectly written poem as all yours are.. but dark.. and so unlike you.. you are usualy such a guiding light .
that shines for us all..
A friend..x

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 14, 2003

emotionally intense write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 14, 2003

Excellent write Kay! I went to comment on your fair dinkum but it was gone, How ya doin lovely lassie;-)

Reviewed by Bill Murray

Reviewed on June 14, 2003

That is sure a lot of tears Kay. I feel like that I cried a whole world of them till I finally find my "Babe." Good to see you posting. Your friend Bill

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on June 14, 2003

Powerful and emotional..glad it's just a poem..
Hugs
Your island pal,
Jenni

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 14, 2003

So heart wrenching, in so few words. Incredible write, Kay. Don't know how real this is but you are loved.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 14, 2003

(((kay)))

don't scare me like this *sweating* wow, glad it's fiction

fiction or not, it is still an attention grabber--dramatic, intense, the cry of desperation clearly evident

((((((HUGS)))))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on June 14, 2003

Very powerful and dramatically done.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on June 14, 2003

Kay, I wrote something the other day, still trying to figure out if it's fiction or not...smile... thanks for sharing.. stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 14, 2003

hope things get better for you soon, kay; you are definitely in my thoughts and prayers! (((HUGS))) and love from america, your friend, karen lynn. :(

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on June 14, 2003

Nothing's up Krissy,relax,and get well soon.

No need for me to snap out of it Ted....
it is just a poem.
Yes Peggy,you are right....it is fiction.
Love you all.
Thank you for the comments.
Hugs.
x
kay.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)

Reviewed on June 14, 2003

Such powerful emotion! Sending warm thoughts and gentle hugs.

~Joseph

Reviewed by Kristian Mahrling-Harding

Reviewed on June 14, 2003

hey mate,
what's up? i hope this was just a venting write and not something else.
i can definately relate at times, but then, how could we be a burr in anyone elses saddle if we weren't around to get under it??
hehehehe.
chin up...(i have both of mine in that direction~smile~)
hugs and love
always
krissy

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)

Reviewed on June 14, 2003

{{{{{{{{{{{ Kay }}}}}}}}}}}}
Oh how I can relate to this.. An extremely powerful write..

Its so good to see you writing again hun...

Namaste'
Melanie

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on June 14, 2003

What a happy thought you had, SNAP OUT OF IT!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on June 14, 2003

This is very very powerful write...enjoyed this...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Linda Murray

Reviewed on June 14, 2003

Very striking and breath taking write. All so true at times.((Hugs to you))

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

Very powerful Kay!!
Head Up girl!!

Love
Tinka