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For my broken hearted friend.(reposted happily for my brave friend.)
by Kay P M- Devenish → (All Poetry by Kay P M- Devenish)
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So...it's JUST your life you toss,


no reason for any fuss,


no cause to speak of loss.


You tried to die,why why why....why?


Go ahead,spit upon my heart,


kick it with your battered love


take your life and thus depart.


No need to struggle anymore


she wounded you so close LIFE'S door


and slam it in my face


where I stand longing for a trace


and praying for the grace........of you.


I once died too,but breathe?I do,


(for those like you,I do).


Go ahead,be dead...give up,


spill your will from its cup


or....share your drops,


share to ease our pain.


let us drink your sorrow's rain


and let the wounded rise again.


Hope and dreams strangle from your


deed


and lost am I


in need of just your smile


how can you pass on by


blind to tears from I?


Was that a heartbeat that I heard?


Once upon a word


once beyond my blue?


That moment when I dared to stand


and streatch my hand


 to you.


Gone.


Dust upon the floor


for


she dosent love you anymore


and that is all..that is all.


Wind ...blow me too to kingdom come


for ,if he goes ,I too am done,


I too.... am DONE.


 


Footnote.This poem is for an old friend, someone I care for deeply.


He has a broken heart after breaking up with the one he loves.


He has many friends whom care deeply for him but he could only think of his own pain,I am praying he will be strong for those whom love him....those... like me.


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 Reviews of "For my broken hearted friend.(reposted happily for my brave friend.)"
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
I wish all who consider suicide could read this. It's the victims left in the aftermath that I feel sorry for. Excellent write, Kay!

Reviewed on August 21, 2003
This was so sad Kay, I pray your friend finds the strength to live on, through the thought and love of his friends like you..

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 6, 2003
Great expression !! Love Tinka

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on August 6, 2003
what a good friend you are, I hope time brings him happiness

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
Heartfelt and touchy write....thank u....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
Extremely moving.
~Jackie~

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
share your drops,
share to ease our pain.
let us drink your sorrow's rain
and let the wounded rise again.
Hope and dreams strangle from your deed
and lost am I in need of just your smile
how can you pass on by
blind to tears from I?

You are a good friend... I hope he reads this.. Your lines stung!

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
This is magnificently done, Kay, very wrenching to the reader who can feel such pain in your words...

Reviewed on August 5, 2003
(((kay)))

sad, heartfelt write--well done

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :(

Reviewed on August 5, 2003
What a painful, but excellent piece... you are a good friend to write this...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by ruby singh (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
wonderful write.....ur friend's lucky to have you...I hope things get better for him.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
Excellent show of friendship Kay,wonderful poetry, hope all the best for him.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
Touched me deeply Kay, you are an exceptional friend, may his heart find peace soon.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
You are a good friend to him.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
Those in pain rarely see how many care about them, and need good friends like you to remind them that there is life after loss. Wonderful write.

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
Great expression of anguish, Kay.
Leland


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