AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Neenah Davis-Wilson, iJoy Pedersen, iGlen Schulz, iAlexander Shaumyan, iTrennis Killian, iWilliam Cottringer, iElisabeth Barstowe, iErin Kelly-Moen, iKarin Adams, iTerry Vinson, i

  Home > Biography > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Kay P M- Devenish

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Articles
· Poetry
· News
· Stories
· Blog
· 225 Titles
· 2,711 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Jun, 2002

Kay P M- Devenish, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.



Naked raindrops wearing tap shoes on tin roof.(at my house this morning!)
by Kay P M- Devenish → (All Poetry by Kay P M- Devenish)
  
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

Raindrops wearing tap shoes,
upon my tin roof drop,
practicing their repartee,
tap tap tapping ,just for me,
thus wakening me up.

Their stage...?
A morn in winter.
Their score...?
Written by God,
and all the dancers enter
each one 'The Star' there of.

First a little solo spot,
then a duet falls,
then the chorus line
in time
crashing down their all.

Inside my bedroom theater,
underneath my sheet,
blankets snug around me,
I hear their busy feet.

The backdrop is the dawning sky
the lights the morning star,
tapping naked on the tin,
(tap shoes ONLY they're wearing!)
clear blue dancers... tumbling,
outdone,each one, so far.

Heavy shoes upon wet feet
tin sounds steel-hard as they beat
comforting these ears they meet
this tiny house
in lofty street
where heartbeats,clapping,are.

Upon the tin roof tapping
eagerly feet fall
millions of them rapping
toward a curtain call.

Snuggled up I beg for ' more,'
but their dance is done,
and I must lie here spellbound
by ....
each

single

one.






Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "Naked raindrops wearing tap shoes on tin roof.(at my house this morning!)"
Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
Reviewed on August 8, 2003
Exquisite! I love the rain - stanzas three and four echoed here last night as I began to doze - excellent work, dear, much kudos!

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on August 8, 2003
I love the rain and it's orchestration
on the roof. You've captured it so well.

Reviewed on August 8, 2003
oh, this is absolutely ADORABLE, kay! thanks for sharing this wonderful write; i truly enjoyed this! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in america, karen lynn. :)

Reviewed on August 8, 2003
(((kay)))

o, i love this--this is a keeper

PERFECTION!! the imagery is outstanding!

send some of those tap dancing *did you say naked? heehee* raindrops to texas--haven't seen rain in MONTHS

(((((HUGS))))) and thanks for my smiles this morning

love,

karla. :)

Reviewed on August 8, 2003
Truly perfect, Kay...was doing that at my home yesterday ;-)

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2003
Kay this is excellant and beautiful!!!!
Ohhhhhh how I love the rain, to be out in it and a part of that great dance!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2003

Ahhhhh, to be a kid again! Ha ha, I guess you didn't exactly say that :) You captured a moment in your mind and spun it to paper perfectly.

Thanks,
Emilie

Reviewed by Steve Ralph
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
this is beautiful Kay i can almost see you laying there listening to the rain.
your pommy pal steve

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
I love the soothing sound of rain...but sounds better on my head!! LOL!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jackie Brooks
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
Great poem, I love the sound of rain too, on tin, on canvas, on the car roof, just as long as it is not on my head! Jackie <> <

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
Wwow this one of the best writes I have read on raindrops! This is a gem!

Reviewed by Rick Magers (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
G'devenin' Kay........Your poetry is pleasing to the eye, and soothing to a tired old brain. I enjoyed every word, going back twice to re-read. Special meaning for me because I put a tin roof on this little mountain home when I built it 17 years ago. A great pleasure is listening to raindrops and squirrels, dancing right above my head.

Thanks for a pleasant trip through your head.

Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
i just knock on the cieling with the broom handle...very good write!!!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
Kay.....excellent write.....you have captured much here my friend....I love the sound of rain too.....BHUWAN

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
One Thing Bout Rain It Washes Away Taht Dirt!

TRASK

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
a great one kay

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
Kay, the rain can be soothing, but it has rained for months on end, and a little sunshine here would be a welcomed friend.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
Fantastic, creative, whimsical, wondrous, superb! Perfect! This is my kind of write Kay!I love it!;-)!

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
Oh, did you ever capture this one, Kay. Great imagery, beautifully choreographed. I too, live in a house with a steel roof. And thanks to you, I will be writing on that subject very soon.
Leland


New Poetry by Kay P M- Devenish
Popular Poetry (Biography)
  1.  I knew It was You
  2.  A Eulogy
  3.  Thomas Chickenbone
  4.  Happy Father's Day, Sweet Daddy!
  5.  Hope for a Better Tomorrow...
  6.  My New Fur Babies
  7.  A Head Of Cabbage
  8.  Upper Room Pentecost
  9.  I Dreamed Of Mommy Last Night
  10.  A jolly good fellow
  11.  A Jack Of All Trades
  12.  On Your Retirement
  13.  Nothing
  14.  Scout's Honor
  15.  When Love Begins
  16.  Sky Rider
  17.  Joy Returneth!
  18.  My New Line of Jewelry
  19.  Collage para Luis García-Abrines Calvo
  20.  As if by Magic...
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Your Grandma, My Mom: A Garden of Keepsakes by Margaret Evans

Margaret Kohel Evans invites her mother's grandchildren to a delightful visit with their grandmother, sharing charming memories of her across eighteen life themes.  
Member BookAds

Abducted Alien: A True Story of My Life and My Experience with United by Chris Belec-Joanet-Joannette

AVAILABLE TODAY 2012! PRESS RELEASE, June 1, 2009 A True Story of My Life and My Experience with United States Immigration I was an Abducted Alien by Department of Homeland Security... Startling memoir is about a woman  
Member BookAds

Your Grandma, My Mom: A Garden of Keepsakes by Margaret Evans

Margaret Kohel Evans invites her mother's grandchildren to a delightful visit with their grandmother, sharing charming memories of her across eighteen life themes.  
Member BookAds