For the star I could not reach. (redone old one) (poem) by Kay P M- Devenish on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 24, 2006

once again a very sad but brilliantly written poem,
You are of course Kay a star in your own right,
for there are few that can write in the way you do with so few words to say so much.
It is a pleasure to read,
take care my Ausy friend.

Reviewed by Connie Faust

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

I'm finding that you are incredibly talented with words. A sweet and poignant poem.
Connie

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 29, 2006

Concise, creative, unique and meaningful; well done, Kay. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 2, 2006

I want what Tinka is smoking...Ed

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 2, 2006

eloquent brevity ...

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on February 9, 2005

Kay,

Very unique!! Delivered with great poetic precision ... loved it!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1

Reviewed on September 14, 2003

That's as lovely as it is Brilliant!
Truly amazing!
Note to self: Short can be genius!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on September 9, 2003

bonzer! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn. ;D

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on September 9, 2003

Kay this is exceptional, I love this, says so much in few words and the form is enchanting.

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on September 9, 2003

Perfect!
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on September 9, 2003

This is your shortest, but BEST poem I have read! This is great stuff Kay.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on September 9, 2003

Dear Kay....I loved this short but powerful write my friend...excellent!!!!

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on September 9, 2003

Dear Tinka....what are you smoking?
(Just joking!)I certainly would never touch either of those two,not in a pink fit they make me nervous,in fact I am hiding under your basket (lose some weight will you ,you're squashing me)don't let on to the other's where I am,there are too may sharks in that ocean and they might just throw me in if they find me (for fun)those two guys are too macho for this little bunny's liking.
You have dug me into a hole tink...get me out of it please or send Ron down here to keep me company....he's cute.(wink wink)

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on September 9, 2003

...Wow what rythim what rhyme..what light!
Exquisite!

Vesna

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 8, 2003

Hey PAL you are a star...kick Ronny...dang... he forgot to put you in the PIC as one of my movie-stars...lol!!
So you are still the shy one...hiding behind that damn basket...get out there and show your face.......lol!!

What did you do to Ted...just before I landed on his lap???? Hmmmmmmmm?????

Why did Morchuis run away?

I wonder???? What he showed or told him???

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on September 8, 2003

Beautiful, so beautifully written!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on September 8, 2003

A great little write!

Jack

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on September 8, 2003

Your a star in your own right;-)Lovely poem Kay!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on September 8, 2003

Your a star with in yourself, but reach for another one if you have too.
SMoooooooooo0-0000000-ooooooooo-00000000000CH!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on September 8, 2003

Great write!

Reviewed by Londis Carpenter

Reviewed on September 8, 2003

I rate this five stars. this is an awesome poem. It has a great message and it is done with such an economy of words. Excellent. thank you. this one goes into my library.

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on September 8, 2003

I agree with Jay. :) Stardom is way too overrated. Love, Alex