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Leland's challenge...(finally submitted here).
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I must compose myself to compose

Leland's challenge ,

(it may end up like manuer,

get ready to hold nose!)


I cannot bear to strip you bare
and see you swim the sea
the shellfish know I told you 'no'
'it's never done in its nudie.'

A principal should wear
his full uniform to swim
in principle ,the fish don't wish naked humans in.
And  uniform waves don't crave
your bouncing blubber there
their must be some decorum in this forum that we share.
(Don't blubber about it! and don't lose your head! then you'll get ahead....)
Why don't you buy a share in a swimming pool instead
then I will say 'bye' to clothes and in good stead ,I'll  shed.
Hide your eye though as I slip my slip from off my hide,
We will sneak into the shed and snuggle in that dive.
we'll live our lives and feel so live
we'll splash and paddle , swim and dive.
an hour will be such fun
and I will put you in my will
if  ever I get one....'cause,you're the one.
You will get a tidy sum,you'll  feel like you've won,

(it's all in a good cause....your cause!).
 
some may say that we 'are rude!'
but in May  they will find us  nude.
a Human being.... just being nude
tell me now...
how is that  rude?
 I take a bow and tie my bow...

now I have to go!

ooopppsss....just rememebered ,the tie is all I am wearing!!!!)This is challenge is wearing me out!

Did I tie with anyone leland?

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 Reviews of "Leland's challenge...(finally submitted here)."
Reviewed by ShyPoet 1
Reviewed on September 19, 2003
Amazing use of some VERY difficult words. Well done!

Reviewed on September 18, 2003
You my lady are brilliant and met this challenge hands down. Excellent!!!!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 18, 2003
Now this is brilliant!

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on September 18, 2003
Neat, Kay, well done.
Bobbi

Reviewed by Sharon Williamson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
Kay, as always I enjoyed this work. you are an awesome poet...and poerson.
Sharon;)

Reviewed on September 17, 2003
This was excellent Kay, A fun read and an excellent response to his challenge!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
Hee, hee, I loved it. Lot of work?
SMooooooooooooo0000000000CH!

Reviewed by Jessica Stanfield (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
This is very interesting in deed. Thanks for sharing it!
- J -

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
Kudo's for Kay! Great response to the challenge, met and surpassed!

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
Excellent Kay!

Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
well done for sure

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
This was written after your balloon ride...toooo much fresh air!! Now your brain is clear!!

Very well written!!

love TINKY!!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
Bravo kay,
i love the red words in this and the others..... Good meet for the challenge.
PJ


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