A P A R T. (poem) by Kay P M- Devenish on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 20, 2011

I can certainly relate to this compelling write, Kay. One of my daughters recently moved to Toronto (I live on the west coast here) and the other one moved to Melbourne, Australia. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on July 26, 2004

So true!
We always miss the things we can't have for the time-being.
Instead of treasuring what we had and have.
Humans are so stupid sometimes, don't you think so???
Good write.

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on October 6, 2003

I know this feeling Kay, but now you have something else to look forward to...the next visit :). Excellent write.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on October 5, 2003

Ahhh..my Kate..once a mother always a mother..it seems that is one role that is never relinquished..my God our kids give us so much joy...I am still surrounded by all of mine..six of `em...even though they tend to drive me nuts at times...i revel in their life scenarios and know that I will always have them within me..no matter what !!!
Great write...it is a present to us mothers....I missed you heaps as well...oxoxoxox

Vesna

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

a mother's love is very powerful...

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

I feel your longing to be with your girls...it is so genuine and powerful. Beautiful work.
Amor

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

I know the feeling! My daughter lives a few provinces away from me. Wonderful write.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

(((kay)))

beautiful, yearning, fantastic write of longing and love

well done

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

Beautiful write, Kay.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

Missed you partner!!

Come join the Party on the Beach!!

Lovely heartfelt write from you KaY!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

aww, so lovely and sweet... these girls must know they are loved deeply

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

This is so poignant that it made me eyes well up. Beautifully written, Kay
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

Kay, this is so heartfelt and written with such expression. You capture the moment in this write.... thank you...missed you, too... stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

Lovely write, Kay! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

Well written piece, progression is nice..

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

Pretty!
Really well written! Flows wonderfully!
Shy

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

Oh, Kay.. the way you approach this longing is so effective, so beautifully poetic.. the curtains, the bit of sun.. I could feel myself there and could feel that yearning to have them with you.. This is such a human feeling and you've written it exactly as it truly is. I love this poem. katy xox.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

Absolutely sweet and loving.
TY
Hugs
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

Yes, true, I miss my two who live far away
I've missed you very much Kay.
SMoooooooo0000000000000Ch!