For Mr. Sweetness. (poem) by Kay P M- Devenish on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Steve Ralph

Reviewed on September 8, 2007

Short but very powerfull Kay excellent poem.
From your Pommy Pal Steve

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on November 6, 2003

I do love your poetry Kay!
You say a lot very succinctly. Excellent
~Chrissie

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on November 6, 2003

Deeper than if may look on the surface, great poem, Kay.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on November 5, 2003

big smiles love the waY you said the things you said
what a lady!!!

Reviewed by Robin Ouzman Hislop

Reviewed on November 5, 2003

v cynical, well written

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on November 5, 2003

Clever play on words, and very good. Love it !

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on November 5, 2003

Wow... This was outstanding, I loved this, just got to me,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on November 5, 2003

Excellent write...seems sometimes that is the best kind!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on November 5, 2003

Kay...excellent write!!!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 4, 2003

I think I know the feeling all tooo damn well!!

Stay strong girl!!

Easier sayed than done I know!!

love tinka

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 4, 2003

Terse but very powerful in expression of emotion and meaning. Thank you.

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on November 4, 2003

Loved the write and animation...
The animation reminds me of myself..:)

Yf,
~~Linda~~

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on November 4, 2003

Nice write Kay!

Jack

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on November 4, 2003

Only Those Good Memories Come Alive!

TRASK

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 4, 2003

Kay you are such a treat! This is great, love YOUR sweetness;-)!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on November 4, 2003

Kay, oh well some are not as sweet as they seem
x0x0x0x0x0x cute animation,,,,,,

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on November 4, 2003

"For Mr. Sweetness" has enchanted my soul, polished my heart, and showered dews of grace on me.

Poet, this piece of art is scented with the aroma of wonders.

I wish that all men and woman that are united be laced the power of this poem.

Thank You for sharing grace and beauty.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 4, 2003

awwwww...cute write, kay! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn. :D love ya, kay!

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on November 4, 2003

Hi Sweetie-Pie,

That always seems to be the way. Kick him onto the curb for me.
Love and Eternal Happiness is my wish for you.

Love, Janet xoxoxo