"Mommmeeeee!" is such a powerful poem that builds and builds till at the end, if you have a heart, you cry because of the sheer joy!
I was in the Navy, and this poem reminded me of all that I enjoyed about being out to sea. You have written in such a fresh manner here,Jo, that I am literally tickled. "the stars are liquid diamonds in the sea" is one of my fav lines. Absolutely superb writing in my opinion. Keep writing please Jo.
Nice world cruise with all the scenic sights and bird, fish, coral and all the other descriptions in his write. I was with you all the way through it and it ends in a devine way.
Under Amber Skies, written by author and poet Jill Eisnaugle, is a wonderful collection of rhyming poetry guaranteed to please every reader. In this, her second book, she writes of new friendships kindled, as well as old friendships solidified. She g
Inspirational words!
I also see Jesus when I go to the sea.
Amen
I was in the Navy, and this poem reminded me of all that I enjoyed about being out to sea. You have written in such a fresh manner here,Jo, that I am literally tickled. "the stars are liquid diamonds in the sea" is one of my fav lines. Absolutely superb writing in my opinion. Keep writing please Jo.
a fellow human and poet ~Zach
Be always safe,
Karen