Women Not Allowed, Delicate Subject Here! (poem) by Mark M Lichterman on AuthorsDen

Women Not Allowed, Delicate Subject Here!
by Mark M Lichterman → (All Poetry by Mark M Lichterman)
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I didn't actually know where to put this, so thought... Well, why not Relationships?
Women Not Allowed, Delicate Subject Here! For us becoming older. Specifically for us men that are becoming older. More specifically for us men that are older. Women, or those easily offended, delicate subject here! So if easily offended, simply put, Go away! Always one to appreciate girls and, when no longer a boy, to this day always one to appreciate women, always one to desire women, I had thought with older age my appreciation, my desire would diminish but, alas, though doing all not to be obvious, my head still turns and my eyes still follow causing this older... causing this old man to believe, to truly believe that this old man will always, will always, until coins are placed upon my no longer seeing eyes, this old man will always appreciate, will always desire, even though... Alas, though "things" no longer work as once they had... Which brings me to the delicate subject here. The delicate subject most women will never know unless informed by one of the opposite sex, most women will never know how men, how most old men miss... Call it what you will, guys: A woody! A hard-on! A boner! An erection! Women will never know how old men, how most of us old men miss awakening in the morning without: A woody! A hard-on! A Boner! An erection! Sorry, delicate subject here. But for you old guys, for some of you old guys, I just wanted you to know... You ain't alone!

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on September 26, 2010

I enjoyed your write Markie, In these times they have ways of helping out older people so that they can enjoy their sensual lives. Of course the title drew me in too.
hug
Kat

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on September 20, 2010

Giggle...The title would of course draw me in....and the write is a realistic look at aging...I enjoyed the frankness of this one, Mark...it ain't all roses for aging women either....maybe I'll write a frank little ditty about it one day...

Your friend,
Anna

Reviewed by Kalikiano Kalei

Reviewed on September 19, 2010

Concerning this topic, I am wont to reflect back on an astringent remark attributed to Socrates, who, when asked if he ever missed the sexual allure of women as an old man, said (in words more or less amounting to) "Achieving my seniority as an old man is akin to being finally able to dismount from a raging, fiery, out-of-control stallion." There is a lot of truth to that, when one considers that the raging hormones of youth have been largely responsible for almost all of the worst excesses committed in the history of humanity.

That having been said, I was conceived when my father was 68 and am now in my mid 60s myself. Despite that fact, my 'gun' is still charged with sharp flint and dry powder. I guess it's in the genes, as well as 'in the jeans', hee-hee.

Thanks for sharing those observations with the rest of us teenagers in geriatric clothing! :)))

Aloha mai e, Kalikiano

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on September 18, 2010

Blue Magic might fly the totem pole
and rise the dragon from his slumber though
there is nothing in the world offensive
about pleasures of the flesh...and passion
for the woman in ones life...as she surely
misses this too...

May Passions Wine Spill for You
Vickie

Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd

Reviewed on September 17, 2010

A good poem none would understand better than an older man. Laurel

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

No improvement since January? Fire the quack! Patrick

Reviewed by Susan Bergeron

softly spoken...

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Speak for yourself old timer.

Ciao
Tony