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A Tunnel Without Light
by D. L. Vegas → (All Poetry by D. L. Vegas)
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Darkened all around her
She couldn't see her hands
Panic started to rise
She tried to speak
A tightness in her vocal chords
Feeling detached,
Her body was no longer hers...
There was bleakness all around
It touched her whole being
Pushing her deeper
Into...
Darkness, a tunnel without light
Trying to crawl her way out
The darkness would not allow
All she wanted was to sleep forever... ...


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 Reviews of "A Tunnel Without Light"
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on September 6, 2011
So eloquently describes the horror of depression!!! Such a nightmare! Thanks for sharing this well-penned poem!

Anna

Reviewed by Christine Volkoff (Reader)
Reviewed on September 4, 2011
Anyone who can live through this, come out of it and smile again, has to be incredibly strong. "Feeling detached, her body was no longer hers"...precise and profound.

Reviewed on September 4, 2011
D.L.

A beautiful but sad write about the monster of depression.

Mary

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on September 3, 2011
You capture this brilliantly, Deborah!!!
Great writing ~ just hope it's not auto-biographical.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 3, 2011
Sounds like you have captured the depth of depression and what it feels like to be in that place...I know I was there.
fee

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on September 2, 2011
I have heard of this until someone or something calls you back, scary. Great write.

Newfie Hugs, Rose


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