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Clouds of Consciousness
by D. L. Vegas → (All Poetry by D. L. Vegas)
   Rated "PG" by the Author.
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I awoke-
To a pitch-black
Room, unable to see

A fear encompasses
My being

This blackness-
Follows my soul-
Intervenes in my life-
Controls all emotions -

It will not win
Never does it win
Clouds of consciousness


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 Reviews of "Clouds of Consciousness"
Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on May 6, 2013
Profoundly Real
*Deborah*
taking notes..

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on May 6, 2013
Intriguing write, Deborah...well done!

Anna

Reviewed by Christine Volkoff (Reader)
Reviewed on May 5, 2013
What a wonderful, so simple yet profound poem...what a gift!

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on May 5, 2013
Deborah, this is one of your best...well done!
Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed on May 5, 2013
Yes, we have those dark times don't we? We have to gve it our all to get through it or forever be lost.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 4, 2013
This is dark; and I can relate, but I love the optimism and hope at the end. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Isabella Koldras
Reviewed on May 4, 2013
Wonderful poem, Deborah.
It speaks...reality, spirituality
and consciousness that...hovers
within your mind...you within you
...called "me".
Thank you for sharing.
Warm regards Isabella.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 4, 2013
Reality always wins.

G

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2013
I surprise myself, I write what comes out!
Thanks-

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on May 4, 2013
Whoa!!! Deborah!!! Dark stuff. You surprised me, and I don't know why. I like the tone and the conclusion of this one. Yep. Dark is special when done right, and you did it right.


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