Sunless Flowers Never Open
How doggedly the pursuit
For ill-begotten success
Trappings concealed
Amidst tensile voids of darkness
While beneath the facade
Existence reflects
Life's sun
moon
tides
And wind
How wise
How longsuffering
These roots that nourish
Time seeds in all sizes
Color
Strength
Courage
Wonder lust
Yet few grow to full bloom
Perhaps
Few plantings find solace in the wait
This patient evolution of consciousness
Save the flower
Whose mysterious
Enigmatic fragrance of simplicity
Requires little to nurture
Its essence
From sprout of survival
To bloom of vivacity
This willingness to risk
Tenuous mission of trust
For yield of bouquets
Begets colored voices of harmony
Reaching skyward
With velvet touch
Becoming unsung voices of feeling
For that is what transcendence does
Still
Some proclaim dominance
Over such fragile children of nature
Stuffing them in reservoirs of water
Ignoring their tenuous innocence
Yet quick to moan when they wilt
Obviating guiles of fault
A duplicitous romance with life
The consummate shattering of fragrance
So goes the nurturing of many relationships
Seeding
Maintaining
Enjoying a sensorial feast like no other
Until...
Solipsism knows not its
Egregious error
Remaining without light
Destined to but emulate
Sunless flowers
That never open
but anger tempered and delivered with sophistication,
superior word choice and subtle evaluation
(i'm out of sss... now!)
Work with clout and bite, Odin
john
Wonderful read, keep penning and posting. I wait for your next one.
Budd
From sprout of survival
To bloom of vivacity
This willingness to risk
Tenuous mission of trust
For yield of bouquets
Begets colored voices of harmony
Reaching skyward
With velvet touch
Becoming unsung voices of feeling
For that is what transcendence does
... within each of us is perhaps that reached for "sublime" and I like to think that this community of writers here is such that encourages each one of us to strive for that. I like that "transcendence" is the hinge to this poem, notwithstanding its downward-spiral of "stunted" introspection at the end How perverse we are as mortals to seek the dark rather than life-giving light! :)) xx