If I Could (Joseph’s Challenge) (poem) by SHERRY G HEIM on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 15, 2005

I love this, you have a way with words!
Blessings~Shell

Reviewed on August 1, 2005

Dear Sherry,

There is beauty and grace in every line within this exceptional gem. You have so exquisitely voiced through written word, the most beautiful imagery and sentiments possible. This is a keeper Sherry.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

OH Sherry this is such a truly lovely loving poem of your heart and I love the whole poem the dropping of the feathers so unique as is the whole poem I really love this beautiful poem Alot! May Love and Peace fill your life everyday.You are so neat!
Tracey xoox

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

My goodness, Sherry, I do believe you have single-handedly, with pen in hand, refreshed, enlightened, calmed and now delivered the very lovliest moment of my morning.

Your words are soft... they make me believe, they transport. I especially loved the last verse... 'peace and love reign'... Sigh... just imagine! Reading this was not just a joy, it was a gift. You've exceeded all expectations. Very cool! katy xox

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

This is truly a beautiful gift so well shared and presented. Thank you, Sherry. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

Superbly beautiful response to the challenge Sherry.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

Ah Sherry, now this is lovely, a beautiful response to the challenge,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Pacific Ink (Reader)

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

Very passionate and well written, Sherry!

Pacific

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

excellent response, Sherry ... no doubt, the transmutation of an evolving being ...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

A very creative challenge entry, Sherry, and my favorite stanza:

If I could be a tree full of blossom
With fruit of promise so very awesome
I’d feed the souls who pass me by
That with a hungry heart no man should die

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

Most beautiful response Sherry!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

Oh, what a beautiful poem in response to my challenge!
I can see that you put a lot of thought into this Sherry
and set it to a wonderful rhyme and rhythm. A message of Love
that I hope many will read.

Blessings,
Joseph

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

This is super lovely, a pure joy to read.

Joy and happiness
HH

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi

Reviewed on July 29, 2005

Beautiful deep passionate write!! Don't know what the challenge is about but I love your write, Sherry!

" ... If I could be a tree full of blossom
With fruit of promise so very awesome
I’d feed the souls who pass me by
That with a hungry heart no man should die

If I could know rebirth as something new
You ask me what it is I’d do
I’d do all in my power to teach everyone
That peace and love should reign under our sun ..."

Lovely! God bless, Sherry!

Sandie.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on July 29, 2005

A lovely write
enjoyed much

William ......Peace & Love

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 29, 2005

Sherry:

This is sooooo beautifully-written and soooo well-structured. I'm jealous!!!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 29, 2005

An excellent and altruistic piece Sherry
" If I could be a tree full of blossom
With fruit of promise so very awesome
I’d feed the souls who pass me by
That with a hungry heart no man should die "
Will take somebeating in Joseph's challenge

Peter

Reviewed by Debby Weinberger

Reviewed on July 29, 2005

outstanding! if i could change my mind..i'd be you....LOL

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 29, 2005

Holy Moly Sherry! A true masterpiece from a friend I can attest to that would do every one of the things she says, and in fact does them even now!You answered this challenge as well as it can be answered , Kudo's to you!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Huda Orfali

Reviewed on July 29, 2005

That peace and love should reign under our sun
Amen to that, poet
simply wonderful
love and peace

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on July 29, 2005

This is an awesome piece.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 29, 2005

It's hard to pick out which was the best answer to Joseph's challenge as every poem I have read is a winner. Sherry this is a wonderful poem and I agree with it completely.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 29, 2005

Brilliant from start to finish.
Truely great sentiments, and powerful hope in the final stanza...

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 29, 2005

If I could know what Joseph's challenge was it wouldn't make any difference as to how I feel about this poem. You covered all the necessary bases to make life beautiful and peaceful and you did it with you usual class act.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 29, 2005

Sherry,

If only--you just did. Beautifully answer to Joseph's challenge!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)