If only everyone would listen! An excellent write.
Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2003
This is so cute what a flow the rhymning was right on cue marvelous verses with clicked and the last verse was just the right amount of icing on the cake !!!!
Reviewed by J John (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2003
Enjoyed the read :) gotta watch out for those little voices J & J
What a thought provoking poem Sherry! I can identify with this. Sometimes I feel it's merely a lack of confidence, a distrust of our own instincts. The voices represent the doubts,fears and insecurities ...they ask the questions.Sometimes we need the strength to tell them to be quiet!This is excellent.
Love Chrissie
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2003
Sherry, we all have an inner voice. It helps keep us on course. But when there is more than one voice, sometimes we are having deep conflicts and need outside help.
Or sometimes we just accept them and go on through life. Bill
Listen intently to that inner voice...if it feels right then it is the best choice one can make. If it conflicts and gives agony to thought...then it is best ignored as passing thought only. Great write.
Amor
Very good Sherry. You've put your finger on what most of us think about. At least I do, A LOT! It's a "spiritual quest" we all go on sooner or later. The trick is, learn to tell which voice is which. Not always easy.
Bonnie
we must learn to listen to our oversoul... it will teach many things...
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 15, 2003
If it leads, it is wrong.
If you follow with discretion, it is right.
Religion has killed more minds than any war.
God is having a heart attack.
Very good thoughtful poem. We've all been there, I think. And then we begin to think.
Lisa
Loved this!
Reindeer
Love Chrissie
Or sometimes we just accept them and go on through life. Bill
Amor
Bonnie
If you follow with discretion, it is right.
Religion has killed more minds than any war.
God is having a heart attack.
Very good thoughtful poem. We've all been there, I think. And then we begin to think.
~E
Jack
We always have an inner voice telling us what to do, and this inner voice is guided by our angel.
Good write Sherry!
Sandie Angel :o)