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A love poem from the point of view of a man, to a woman, written by the woman. The man wrote the first two lines.
On the Hook
Love is you in my eyes and dreams.
I, though man, pine like the bard's lady of the damask cheek, but with a melancholy of prism'd grays. I swim the stream of your remembered eyes, unmeasured embrace, your verse. You are my secret poem, my sun, rain, wind, a universe unparalleled. Drowning in life's weary waters I stroked your electric waist, trembling; iI became anchored, then otherwise unmoored.
Tonight the moon is cloaked in a doom of clouds, and the jealous rain obtrudes upon my heart like a shroud. I need the ripple of your skin beneath my palms, need to wrap you, be wrapped, and lie imperceptibly turning with the cosmos, a constellation all our own. Oh, this alone! But the bloodened hook is tenacious, you are another's catch. You strain, fins flailing glistening twilight tears. I can only wait. Always, I will wait: a torment, an ecstasy. Know this, my sibilant sail my avatar my dolphin's dirge my calcified star. Copyright Julianza Shavin 2008
Reviews of "On the Hook"
New Poetry by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin
Edwin
Exquisite is all I can say - and wow!!!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Mary
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