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On the Hook
by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin → (All Poetry by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin)
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A love poem from the point of view of a man, to a woman, written by the woman. The man wrote the first two lines.

   

                       On the Hook     

          Love is you in my eyes and dreams.

I, though man, pine like the bard's lady
of the damask cheek, but with
a melancholy of prism'd grays.
I swim the stream of your
remembered eyes, unmeasured embrace,
your verse.  You are my secret poem,
my sun, rain, wind, a universe unparalleled.
Drowning in life's weary waters
I stroked your electric waist, trembling;
iI became anchored, then otherwise unmoored.
Tonight the moon is cloaked in a
doom of clouds, and the jealous rain
obtrudes upon my heart like a shroud.
I need the ripple of your skin
beneath my palms, need to wrap you,
be wrapped, and lie imperceptibly
turning with the cosmos, a constellation
all our own.  Oh, this alone!
But the bloodened hook is tenacious,
you are another's catch.
You strain, fins flailing
          glistening twilight tears.
I can only wait.
Always, I will wait:
a torment, an ecstasy.
Know this,
my sibilant sail
my avatar
my dolphin's dirge
          my calcified star.
            Copyright Julianza Shavin 2008




 

 


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 Reviews of "On the Hook"
Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Great imagery. --Charlie

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Romantically beautiful,I love it,take care

Edwin

Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Julianza,

Exquisite is all I can say - and wow!!!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Very beautiful love story.

Mary

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
This surely "speaks" for me, Julianza. Mea culpa. Love and best wishes,

Regis


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