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Estate Sales
by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin → (All Poetry by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin)
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I realize I am not being completely scientific in the beginning 4 lines. I tried note-pad, but it will only copy underlined, if, finally, single-spaced. I have been to two estate sales. This is just a draft. My intent is to show invasiveness into intimate things. Not there yet.

 

                         Estate Sales 

They come like coyotes, like sharks,

like snakes, like hyenas, like wasps,

like soldiers, like hawks, like vultures,

like pirates to plunder the dead.

They come in cars, in trucks

in vans, on motorcycles.

on bikes, scooters, and foot, to

rubberneck the remains.

 

They pillage plates, glasses,

mugs, appliances, silverware,

and strange assorted utensils,

suddenly essential, --

consider coffee-tables, heaters,

folding trays, suitcases --

gather into couches and chairs,

rockers and recliners, adjusting

their feet, bottoms, backs,

sniffing for signs of smoke.

 

They cite tvs, cd's, tapes,

their various players, exercise bike

weights, treadmill, plunk the piano,

rifle through sheet music, strum guitars,

ponder printers, computers, fax,

staplers, punchers, rulers, desks,

hutches, file cabinets, ransack

dozens of boxes of books.

 

They target fake flowers, pictures,

vases, throw rugs, telephones,

answering machines, test huge shelves

for sturdiness, pick at knickknacks:

snow-globes, baskets, carvings,

candle-sticks, clocks and stones.

Patio furniture, wishing well, wind-chimes,

statues, pet carriers, leashes, doghouse,

tools, ladders, step-stools, sprinklers,

hoses, half-used gallons of paint,

lawnmower, weed-eater, fertilizer,

rakes, shovels and hoe.

 

They finger soap dishes, cosmetics,

linens, shower curtain, towels, then

move to washer, dryer, clothes racks,

hangers, iron, board, beds, spreads,

end-tables, shams, quilts, throws,

chests, wardrobes, mirrors, gloves,

hats, jewelry, sewing machine,

and strip after strip of orphan cloth

which, with a little imagination,

could become something useful.

 

Leaving, they see a wheelchair to the

left, a walker to the right,

excessively empty, and for sale.

Outside, they avoid a writhing swarm

of ants working a worm.

Glut and giddy with treasure,

they leave behind them Death,

which, with a bit of imagination,

can become nothing else.

 

copyright Julie K. Shavin 2009

 

 

 

 





 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Estate Sales"
Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on June 17, 2009
I like it. Have you read David Hightower's ESTATE SALE? go check him out if not, I think you'll like... --Charlie

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on April 26, 2009
Plebeians searching with a lust for the despair abandoned by the owner's passing -- Julianza, these are the spoils the crass seek in a frenzy -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 25, 2009
a remarkable sense of movement, as far as imagery, in this chronically detailed assortment of artifacts left by the deceased for the pickings of the living ... particularly like the image,
"Outside, they avoid a writhing swarm
of ants working a worm.
Glut and giddy with treasure,
they leave behind them Death,
which, with a bit of imagination,
can become nothing else."

death indeed cannot be altered ... nor its predecessors' imagination ...

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on April 24, 2009
Strange the way people swarm to pick the remains of the dead, like vultures. One thing that hovers here in this write is the mass of things that someone leaves behind. Sorrowfully indicative of our culture. Makes one glance around and take stock. Are our lives so sorely lacking? Great write, Julie!

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on April 23, 2009
How perfectly you have expressed this.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on April 23, 2009
Julie, the only painless thing about this sale is the knowledge that
the deceased is not there to witness it. -gene.

P.S. Well done, J.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 22, 2009
How sad. You have expressed it perfectly. Thank you, Juli. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed on April 22, 2009
You've penned it perfectly, here - well done, Julianza.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 22, 2009
In a way it seems such a shame to be trampling on the death of a fellow human being, but you have done justice with this write...

Be always safe,
Karen


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