Top five most annoying things to hear from a parent:
5. Clean your room, or I'll put it up for rent!
4. Get straight A's!
3. Young lady you've taken enough sick days!
2. Let me think about that...NO!
1. Because I said so!
Top five things that put me in a bad mood:
5. When I am at a friends house and her parents make gross food.
4. Getting my period at exactly the wrong time!
3. Not being able to find something that rhymes.
2. Realizing I'm a pessimist.
1. Watching other girls get kissed.
Top five things that make me depressed:
5. Realizing I can't go to school in what I'm dressed.
4. Hearing my brother's back to booze.
3. Any sport or game that I lose.
2. Being yelled at by anybody at all.
1. Looking at a barbie doll.
Top five things that anger me:
5. Being stung, unprovoked, by a bee.
4. My sister thinking she's special because she's older.
3. When winter's coming and everything gets colder.
2. When people have no reason to be rude.
1. When a guy calls me "prude."
Top five reasons I overcome these things:
5. Laughter and the side aches it brings.
4. Friends and their quirks.
3. Finding that your old stuff still works.
2. Poetry.
1. Being me!
I couldn't resist!
And now I'm listless....
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Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2003
*smiles* I enjoyed this Kaci...p.s. I think rhyming is overrated anyway, but that's just me :-)
Hi Kaci,
Enjoyed reading your write, I'm sure everyone can relate to maost of what you pointed out, welcome.
Nancy
Reviewed by Sarah Mathews (Reader)
Reviewed on October 24, 2003
Hey Kaci, great job, i think this poem is something alot of girls can relate too. its cool that you tried something different from the usual format. keep up the awesome work!
Well it's not true that you are "unloved." This piece of expression is great self-disclosure. I think it takes courage to do that. Be proud of being you. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Regis
Hey Kaci! Stop feeling unloved1 Now, y'hear? I had arrived at
the second stanza before I realised this was a poem. So, I started again and enjoyed the journey from "Go!" to "Whoa!". Brilliant concept and profesionally done! You certainly are versatile and that's good! Give us some more, please.
This one joins some other gems in "my library".
Kaci!!!!!! This is the first I've seen you here in the den... can I say, Welcome!" I really enjoyed this write, and I really love how you ended it with such "hopefulness", on the light side would be a better way to say it... thank you for sharing this... Would you mind if I tried this with the same questions? I think it would be a great challenge, for all of AD.... thanks again, hope to read more of you....
In Spirit,
Bear
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Enjoyed reading your write, I'm sure everyone can relate to maost of what you pointed out, welcome.
Nancy
luvs----SarahBeara
5. interesting
4. clever
3. neat
2. nice job
1. cool
the second stanza before I realised this was a poem. So, I started again and enjoyed the journey from "Go!" to "Whoa!". Brilliant concept and profesionally done! You certainly are versatile and that's good! Give us some more, please.
This one joins some other gems in "my library".
In Spirit,
Bear