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Looked into the Sky
by A Serviceable Villain → (All Poetry by A Serviceable Villain)
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"for all women, for they are the other half of the sky . . ."


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  Created a distinction from
my own mind - there was no
north, south, east or west,
took a new direction, at first
wasn't happy, then saw a new dawn...
There appeared a vision -
was once again holding her
hand as I looked into the sky
it was there all the time,
just had to look up and see
the light, turned away from the dark...
Without a wish, without a will
my tearing eyes saw a bright star,
she had waited for me, never
stopped in believing, didn't give
in to rhyme or reason - our dream
was held by the love in her eyes...

'2008' RLS


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 Reviews of "Looked into the Sky"
Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2009
Romance..AAHHHH!

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

An inspiring poemization... "Looked into the Sky" sings.

"Created a distinction from my own mind (Opening line)

our dream was held by the love in her eyes..." (Closing line)

In respect,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 17, 2008
A fine ode to women, Lance. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 17, 2008
it was there all the time,
just had to look up and see

Amazing how that works sometimes.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on October 17, 2008
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR WORDS!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed on October 16, 2008
Lance,

Beautifully written love poem. Your poetry is so beautiful.

Mary

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 16, 2008
I like the way you speak of women,very lovely, Robert...ET

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on October 16, 2008
well said

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on October 16, 2008
Lovely! Good to see you back here, Mr Sheridan! Happened to find you at Sandie's...

Gina

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 16, 2008
What a vision of beauty your photograph is! Your wondrous visions leave me breathless.....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 16, 2008
Oh my,this left me breathless sweet man..wonderful writing...Hugssss


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