like verbal alchemic elixir, Lance. The title especially has the chant-like rhythm and sound of both the sacred and "profane". Great to see you back, teasing the old grey cells as per u! :)) Hope you're well. xx
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
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Absolutely - Cwidegiedd deorwierže
(Utterance valuable) - thanks for sharing this.
Love Tinka
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
What a wonderful inspiring poem this is!!! Great job!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
To the Author:
I did like Your inspiring and unique composition. Congratulations!
I would like to be allowed to suggest to have this work posted first the translation followed by the original.
It is my opinion that the readers will find it much easier to read.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
"Treguna Mekodies Tracorum Satis Dee".
******************** Translation:
Acknowledge belief
Capture desire
Earnestly follow
Gather heaven
Incarnation judgment
Keep life-sustaining
Make use-of [k]nightwork
Occupy purpose
Quickly remain-standing
Summon thought
Utterance valuable
Weave-together yearning.
**************************** Original:
"Treguna Mekodies Tracorum Satis Dee".
Oncnawan ge-leafa
Lęccan neodlašu
Eornoste folgian
Ge-gašerian heofon
Menniscnis dom
Healdan fržfrišende
Neotan nihtweorc
Bysigian modgežanc
Hrędlice ofstondan
Lašian gehygd
Cwidegiedd deorwierže
Gebregdan langung.